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Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/17/2006 - 07:50 pm Title: Chapter Thiry two

Edina's remark about being a maid sounded kinda bitter to me, I definitely think she's up to something. Great chapter!

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/14/2006 - 11:32 pm Title: Chapter Thiry two

Edina seems happy with her role in the house, but her attitude is a bit trying. William was right, though, the house is Buffy's to make into a home, not Edina's. Buffy seems to want to push William away before he leaves her, I hope his persistence wins out.

Reviewer: Kimmie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/14/2006 - 10:07 pm Title: Chapter Thiry two

OK ... the ghost really meant to hit Buffy with the chair for being such a witch to William ... am I close?

Seriously lovin' the story ... but seriously wanting to shake sense into Buffy. I'm hoping that it's she and William against the ghosties and the strange housekeeper. No one should be treating that guy badly. (BIG TIME William/Spike fan here ... big time) Can't wait for the next chapter ...

Reviewer: willowmouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/14/2006 - 07:55 am Title: Chapter Thiry two

go Buffy!! Great chapter

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/14/2006 - 03:07 am Title: Chapter Thiry two

okay........edina is kind of creeping me out!!!!! i know shehas something to do with.....something in this story and it's definately something bad!!!! loved it so much!!! great job

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/14/2006 - 03:07 am Title: Chapter Thiry two

okay........edina is kind of creeping me out!!!!! i know shehas something to do with.....something in this story and it's definately something bad!!!! loved it so much!!! great job

Reviewer: ash Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/14/2006 - 12:52 am Title: Chapter Thiry two

oohhh the ghosts dont seem to be all that happy..loved the chapter...cant wait for more!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/14/2006 - 12:10 am Title: Chapter Thiry two

Something is sure upsetting those ghosts! I hope Buffy doesn't push William away! Great chapter!

Reviewer: Dirktavian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/13/2006 - 10:30 pm Title: Chapter Thiry two

So I wonder if Buffy is pushing William so hard because she wants to make him walk away, or see how much he'll put up with. More than likely, she doesn't know any other way to be-- picked on by her parents to the point that everything makes her defensive, even innocent comments, and feeling so unworthy of love. Plus, someone who's felt so alone for so long must feel sort of strange to have someone constantly wanting to hang around-- even if it's a nice-kind of strange, it's not what she'd be used to. She may just be pushing to get a little of her own "space" back-- since she's not willing to make the space for herself in the house, then she may be trying to make that space within her relationship with William. Interesting interaction with the ghosts. Wonder how she'll finally make first contact-- Will she call on Dru?

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/13/2006 - 07:38 pm Title: Chapter Thiry two

Well, I'm not quite trusting Edina, but I commend her for putting Buffy in her place (Me maid you Mistress). I know Buffy's just trying to keep her happy and secure, but sometimes people who have provided service to others for their lifetime really prefer the stations be kept separate, perhaps Edina falls into this catagory, who know (well, you maybe cause hey, your character). Too bad Buffy can't be a bit more open with Will, but perhaps that's coming. So are the ghosts really just pissed like Buffy thinks (hopes) or is there one or two entities that just don't like her and plan to make her life miserable. And what of Dru? More please.

Reviewer: Renee' Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/13/2006 - 06:02 pm Title: Chapter Thiry two

Interesting that the ghosts are reacting like that. I hope all turns out well. Thanks for a good update!

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/13/2006 - 04:34 pm Title: Chapter Thiry two

I hope Buffy takes what William said into consideration. What's up with those ghosts? Update soon please!

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/13/2006 - 04:34 pm Title: Chapter Thiry two

Wow.. Buffy freaked out because Buffy want to bend towards what Edina wants. In a way William is right: Buffy needs to make it HER home. ~ And Edina seems to have the same opinion... or had heard her. ~ And it seems even if Buffy had pissed off the ghosts before it is her now that is pissed off. I wonder if she'll call William now; she promised. ~ Till next part!

Reviewer: rosie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/13/2006 - 03:27 pm Title: Chapter Thiry two

i hope buffy doesnt push spike away. cant wait to see what happens next!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: gotkona Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/13/2006 - 02:57 pm Title: Chapter Thiry two

You are amazing with all the chap you keep putting out. Buffy needs to calm down a bit and not get so touchy over everything they say toher. She sounds a lot like me,:)

Reviewer: luxferi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/13/2006 - 02:47 pm Title: Chapter Thiry two

*sigh* Those ghosts... I really wanna know what's going on inside their heads. Though I know you won't write their pov, but it would probably be fun. It's a great chappie, as usual.

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