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Reviewer: Xela Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/18/2006 - 10:35 pm Title: Chapter Thirty four

:( sadday. But I have faith in the 'ship.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/18/2006 - 09:07 pm Title: Chapter Thirty four

Busted indeed. Buffy reacted so bad (using sex as a weapon) because she thought William was with her (because he saw her as a charity case). That won't be the solution, using sex. William came to the conclusion yet he wasn't able to resist Buffy. ~ Another unexpected turn; good chapter! Still curious what happened to the ghosts (including Dru).

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/18/2006 - 08:55 pm Title: Chapter Thirty four

Stress sex, while probably a good idea at the time, will no doubt just wedge another bit of wood between them. More please.

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/18/2006 - 07:26 pm Title: Chapter Thirty four

Oh my...what's gonna happen next? I hope they don't end up leaving each other! Update soon please!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/18/2006 - 05:18 pm Title: Chapter Thirty four

Buffy seems to think all William wants her for is sex. Feeling really bad for her here. Her parents did a number on her. Great chapter!

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/18/2006 - 05:04 pm Title: Chapter Thirty four

loved it..ummm...buffy acted a little crazed in this one. i can relate to some of her views though. she thinks that everyone is out to get her and that no one REALLY cares. i get that but she's a completely different person when sex comes into play. it's like buffy has no contril over her body. all these new feelings come with sex and she's discovering all of them. unfortunately, she's hurting herself and william in the process. she was all angry and upset at the fact that will had been talking to dru behind her back but as soon as he kissed her she was all 'WANT. TAKE. HAVE.' again, completely understandable. now that buffy has experienced sex she uses it as an escape from her emotions.

lol. ramble much?

great job. please post soon.

Reviewer: Kimmie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/18/2006 - 04:27 pm Title: Chapter Thirty four

WHOA!!!!! I don't think that I took one breath throughout the entire chapter (and I read it twice!). Intense ... Hopefully Dru left enough funds for Buffy to get the counseling she needs ... no way poor William could possible handle that burried deep bag-o-problems. Seriously though, I cannot even begin to predict what will happen next. Great penmanship!!

Reviewer: margaret Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/18/2006 - 03:38 pm Title: Chapter Thirty four

fabulous chapter! but what's going on with the ghosts. william needs to somehow get buffy to realize that he does really love her!

Reviewer: rosie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/18/2006 - 02:36 pm Title: Chapter Thirty four

i hope things get better with those two!! cant wait to see what happens next!!

Reviewer: kirra Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/18/2006 - 01:50 pm Title: Chapter Thirty four

Oh, great story you have here. I expected the chapter to end something like this, but it was very nicely written.
Show me how you care, please She will twist this all against him, won't she? Cause I've got the impression she meant it somewhat sarcasticly.
We'll see. Looking forward more.

Reviewer: luxferi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/18/2006 - 01:34 pm Title: Chapter Thirty four

Wow. I gotta say this - the ending is powerful and held a lot of emotions behind the actions - I've never seen such display, and I could see it clearly in my mind's eyes, rolling like film through your words. It's crushing and made me speechless, really. I don't know how to tell you how it made me feel, but it was powerful.

Author's Response: Thank you very much :)

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/18/2006 - 12:34 pm Title: Chapter Thirty four

Wow! What an intense chapter, the ending of it was so heartbreaking. Can't wait to read more. Good update.

Author's Response: Thank you :)

Reviewer: ash Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/18/2006 - 12:23 pm Title: Chapter Thirty four

loved the chapter...but where do they go from there?...will she be pissed off still?...more soon please.

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