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Reviewer: kcarolj65 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/20/2006 - 10:10 am Title: Chapter Thirty five

You asked if I like anything about the chapter, and yes, I do. I like the reality of it, in that Buffy's feelings of worthlessness and unlovableness persist so strongly, rather than disappearing after one or two affirmations from William. I love that William is just as stubborn as she is (lucky for her, probably even more so!) and I like that he's not going anywhere until she believes him.

Reviewer: rosie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/20/2006 - 02:03 am Title: Chapter Thirty five

cant wait to see what happens!!

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/20/2006 - 01:41 am Title: Chapter Thirty five

Poor William, just when he thought things were looking up, Buffy's brain (and insecurities) kick in and everything gets all bollixed up. More please. love the tale.

Reviewer: Jade2099 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/19/2006 - 08:42 pm Title: Chapter Thirty five

Interesting story dealing with the paranormal. I just read the entire thing in one sitting and I'm hooked! Poor Buffy and poor Will...something tells me this isn't going to get any easier.

Reviewer: Cas Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/19/2006 - 03:49 pm Title: Chapter Thirty five

Loved the chapter despite the wonky formatting. What was up with that? Especially loved your description about patience/impatience. Got Spike to a T there, and at the end as well.

Author's Response: Thanks. Not sure what happened with the formatting

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/19/2006 - 03:42 pm Title: Chapter Thirty five

Poor Will, I hope they work this out for both of their sakes. Update soon please!

Reviewer: margaret Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/19/2006 - 02:58 pm Title: Chapter Thirty five

good for william, buffy needs to see that he does love her! i love the way you use the thought sex instead of love like in the series, but with the au story, very insightful. please update soon

Reviewer: Raspy_Luv Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/19/2006 - 02:51 pm Title: Chapter Thirty five

I actually liked the Wuthering Heights reference. Like the update. Eager for more. :)

Author's Response: I liked the Wuthering Heights reference too. :) Thank you.

Reviewer: kcarolj65 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/19/2006 - 10:03 am Title: Chapter Thirty five

Loving this story...but a couple of word choices don't work: "She was as detrimental to him as breathing and blood..." Detrimental means "causing injury, damage or loss," and I very much doubt this is how William thinks of Buffy! A more appropriate word is integral, which means "being an indispensable part of a whole; essential."

The reference to Wuthering Heights seems contrived and a little silly - we know William loves Buffy intensely, you don't need to use literary references to emphasize that, as you're doing a fine job describing his feelings on your own!

A couple more corrections: Sure, one could take care of oneself well enough, but... He'd mistaken her exuberance for making love with him for love...

Author's Response: Thank you. I don't think it hurts to use literary references to get your point across. Even if you can describe it well enough on your own. Especially with such an intense story as Wuthering Heights

Author's Response: I thank you for pointing out my mistakes, I am human and it happens. Was there anything you liked about the chapter?

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/19/2006 - 08:26 am Title: Chapter Thirty five

William needs to be the strong one here, he has to keep Buffy, don't give her up even if she wants it (to prevent to get hurt). If he can do that they'll have a chance. And I think they have... Because the love is there on both sides. (loved the update)

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/19/2006 - 05:31 am Title: Chapter Thirty five

I loved reading William's perspective of what's going on between him and Buffy. It's so sad to see William and Buffy hurting like this. I'm really looking forward to finding out what happens in the morning when they wake up. Great chapter!

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/19/2006 - 05:26 am Title: Chapter Thirty five

poor babies!!! i feel so sorry for the both of them but ireaally loved this chapter. please post soon.

Reviewer: Dirktavian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/19/2006 - 05:05 am Title: Chapter Thirty five

What a treat to read 3 chapters in a row! I missed your story while the site was down. At any rate-- big drama. I'm glad William came clean about Dru, since you can't hide big secrets and have a releationship. Looking foward to actually making contact with the ghosts. Hopefully, Buffy will let everyone in soon.

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