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Reviewer: roo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/23/2006 - 12:33 pm Title: Chapter Thirty nine

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

Reviewer: Dirktavian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/23/2006 - 11:16 am Title: Chapter Thirty nine

I love William's obvious determination in getting through to Buffy. You can see the mental shift-- kind of like, "Ok, so yelling didn't work, I'll try this approach." What struck me is how his behavior is calm, straight-forward, and while he's constantly checking if something is ok, he doesn't sound insecure. He twice tells her he loves her-- as if it's a plainly established fact of life. It reminds me of how one would act toward a frightened animal, to keep them from scampering away. Guess she is a bit skittish when it comes to deep emotions; the girl isn't used to her power in that arena. At any rate, wonderfully calculated characterization on your part-- I'm absolutely loving it.

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/23/2006 - 03:14 am Title: Chapter Thirty nine

getting creepy now. post soon. loved it.

Reviewer: ash Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/23/2006 - 02:07 am Title: Chapter Thirty nine

loved the chapter!!!

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/23/2006 - 12:38 am Title: Chapter Thirty nine

I trust Buffy's gut feeling, i'm glad she's keeping Edina in the dark. I just love how supportive William is. I can't wait to find out if the ghosts do any more damage through the night. Wonderful chapter!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/23/2006 - 12:33 am Title: Chapter Thirty nine

Can't wait to find out what's going on. Great chapter!

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/22/2006 - 11:28 pm Title: Chapter Thirty nine

I hope this works out for them! I wonder ho long it'll take for Buffy to realize she just might love him Update soon please!

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/22/2006 - 10:54 pm Title: Chapter Thirty nine

Buffy's a yo yo (not the toy, or even nuts) just that she yo yos back and forth so much. It's a wonder William can keep up. Love the tale. look forward to the next upate.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/22/2006 - 09:04 pm Title: Chapter Thirty nine

Some step forward.. I wonder if there will be some back too ;-)
Loved it.. I wonder if Buffy only had the feeling (imagined) to be 'hunted' or if she really was.

Reviewer: rosie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/22/2006 - 08:43 pm Title: Chapter Thirty nine

cant wait to see what happens next!!

Reviewer: Xela Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/22/2006 - 08:10 pm Title: Chapter Thirty nine

Interesting. I bet Edina knows more than she's saying. And I wonder where Tara got off to? Can't wiat for hte next update!

Reviewer: Kimmie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/22/2006 - 05:39 pm Title: Chapter Thirty nine

Thanks for a great chapter ... we needed a little levity here. loved the comment ... "are you scared too?" and the John Edwards reference ... clever. This chapter was a joy to read. I get nervous when she is just outright nasty to him (too much like BTVS season 6) Know what I mean? Anyway this was great and soothing to the soul.

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