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Reviewer: CelesteAvonne Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/26/2007 - 10:42 pm Title: Chapter 12 - The Soul's Betrayal

Dawn's shirt - hilarious!

Oh drat! Heart-breaking, especially for Dawn and William. And Buffy. Of course, for Buffy.

Now I'm curious how Connor will react, now that Dawn's gone and Angel's to blame.


Reviewer: Angie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/10/2006 - 08:12 am Title: Chapter 12 - The Soul's Betrayal

This chapter made me want to cry, I went back and re-read it twice. I felt so sorry for Conner and Dawn. I felt sorry for everybody. I think this is a great story.

Author's Response: Meant in the nicest way... I'm glad I made you cry. Lying is never the best answer... especially when it comes to Angel and making unilateral decisions.

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/10/2006 - 02:04 am Title: Chapter 12 - The Soul's Betrayal

that is so wrong!!! i would have rathered giles and willow not find a way for buffy to come back at all than to have her come back and go all marble-y again. *sighs* please make this write. loved it. post soon. great job.

Author's Response: Willow and Giles did manage to free poor Buffy. I wonder who it was to remarbelize her? Liliaeth and I are really trying to make this all come out right. Just seems to be taking a long, long time. Wish us luck?

Reviewer: scaryscouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2006 - 07:58 pm Title: Chapter 12 - The Soul's Betrayal

This is such an awesome story I even emailed my Irish penfriend to get her to read it. I'm guessing Buffy won't become herself until William is old enough to be with her-in the Biblical sense of course

Author's Response: You make it a small world after all. Thanks for spreading the fic around the world, hon. I'd say your guess is a fair bet. *grins*

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2006 - 07:39 pm Title: Chapter 12 - The Soul's Betrayal

Buffy was gone? I wonder what she did... does she sleep? It sounds bad that she feels weak. Oh OH! Did it work? Seems as if Buffy is back.. "And their birth cries will rent the air as the grounds themselves do tremble to give up their lost soul â?? as it tears its bonds asunder." Then maybe this is Buffy's (re-)birth. But what about the next part Wesley was reading? How sad.. Buffy is back being a statue. I wonder what Illyria has to do with everything. If it would be so 'easy' to resurrect her (Illyria).. I wonder what she (Illyria) will do if she comes back. Poor Buffy, poor William. How sad for them. And even Dawn is leaving now.

Author's Response: It's a real mess for them all, isn't it? I do hope that over the course of the story that all the questions are answered, at least well enough to make some sense. Glad you're still enjoying, love.

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