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Reviewer: CelesteAvonne Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/27/2007 - 07:16 am Title: Chapter 17 -William and the Terrible, Horrible, No Good, Very Bad Day

So hoping that Nate Chalmers can be trusted in this. I really like the use of that line, 'Can I rest now?' at the end. There are echoes of Spike in Will, but he truly is an innocent, bless his soul.

On to more...

Reviewer: Emilee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/11/2006 - 01:09 pm Title: Chapter 17 -William and the Terrible, Horrible, No Good, Very Bad Day

I have a love/hate relationship with this story. It's incredibly well written and has a unique and engaging plot. But, I loathe how William is treated in this. It makes me want to jump into the story and beat the crap out of the ignorant Watcher's Council. Would I be correct in assuming that it's going to get worse before it gets better? Please tell me it's going to have a happy ending. I can take the gut-wrenching angst if the ending will be happy. Well, happy after the Wrath of God falls on the Council of course. Excellent chapter as far as pulling me further into the story and great job making poor William so easy to care about. As a mother, though, the content just ticks me off. I look forward to the next update.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2006 - 09:11 pm Title: Chapter 17 -William and the Terrible, Horrible, No Good, Very Bad Day

Oh he, William, has to get up awful early. That's awful what they do to him. Look what they did to Pete. Chalmers? I don't trust him much. And what did they do with William after he looked in the crystal (got hypnotized)? ~ Poor one indeed. How he gets treated and it doesn't stop. ~ Till next chapter

Reviewer: golddrake Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2006 - 02:52 am Title: Chapter 17 -William and the Terrible, Horrible, No Good, Very Bad Day

great chapter

Reviewer: Angie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2006 - 02:29 am Title: Chapter 17 -William and the Terrible, Horrible, No Good, Very Bad Day

I am so torn with this story. Part of me wants him saved NOW, and the other part knows there are things that have to happen. I for one enjoy this story, and look forward to seeing it updated.

Reviewer: margaret Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/08/2006 - 09:18 pm Title: Chapter 17 -William and the Terrible, Horrible, No Good, Very Bad Day

thanks for the update, but i'm still shaking in anger for poor little will and what the monsters that have him. ore doing to him. what will buffy be able to do to rescue him? please update soon. your writing is so absorbing, i feel like i'm inside the story.

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