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Reviewer: CelesteAvonne Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/27/2007 - 07:30 am Title: Interlude 17/18 - Ghost in the Machinery

How intricately woven this tale is...

To have the truth spoke to Roger by Wesley is a twist of brilliance.

Reviewer: Emilee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/13/2006 - 03:11 pm Title: Interlude 17/18 - Ghost in the Machinery

Interesting developments. God, the ignorance and arrogance of Roger Wyndham-Pryce (Thing One hehe) is absolutely astounding. I'm getting the feeling that God him/herself could stand in front of him pronouncing judgement and he wouldn'f accept it. And Thing Two's main failing is cowardice pure and simple, but hopefujlly this wake up call will help him along. I am now happily anticipating much smiting of the antagonists. I look forward to the next update.

Reviewer: Yash Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/13/2006 - 06:27 am Title: Interlude 17/18 - Ghost in the Machinery

Oh my gosh! Your story is so great. I love it. Spike/William made human to be raised by Angel. What a great twist. Buffy and Wesley are the guardians of Illrya? Very interesting. I can't wait for more.

Reviewer: kcarolj65 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/12/2006 - 03:20 pm Title: Interlude 17/18 - Ghost in the Machinery

I've just spent a most enjoyable morning reading this story. Excellent characterizations all the way around, and a truly endearing and engaging portrayal of William/Spike. My heart aches for him, and for poor trapped Buffy. Wonderful!

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/12/2006 - 12:16 pm Title: Interlude 17/18 - Ghost in the Machinery

It start as the last chapter ended (my comment): Poor William. *sigh* How he is treated. And now with the drugs they brought the demon out. Seems indeed that it is a child too. But what it the scary blue light? Or better who? Illyria.. and after her Wesley was aloud to speak. The demon is as as innocent as any human on the day of their birth? That's indeed most significant, to use your words. I wonder if Wesley's warnings (and Illyria's) fell to ears that hear. Rather the contrary I assume.

Reviewer: Angie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/12/2006 - 01:26 am Title: Interlude 17/18 - Ghost in the Machinery

Man I was starting to get upset. I can't stand seeing my little Will get upset and abused!!! But I absolutely love this story, and I have total faith in you!

Reviewer: Carol Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/12/2006 - 01:18 am Title: Interlude 17/18 - Ghost in the Machinery

Absolutely awesome

Reviewer: golddrake Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/11/2006 - 06:59 pm Title: Interlude 17/18 - Ghost in the Machinery

great chapter

Reviewer: MARGARET Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/11/2006 - 05:43 pm Title: Interlude 17/18 - Ghost in the Machinery

THANKS FOR THE QUICK UPDATE. COULD THE POWERS OR ILLYRIA SEND SOMEONE TO KICK ROGER DOWN THE STAIRS 2 OR 3 TIMES? AND WHERE'S BUFFY? GREAT STORY, CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT UPDATE

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