aww, there so cute!!! plz continue i cant wait for an update

Ok, dont like criticising but being English have to pick up on a couple of things. If William is only 6 there are things he would not say, bloody git, pet & love are all adult terms and not something he would hear from Giles either. Unless he is Welsh he would call his father dad not da and his mother mum not mom. And like most of my kind we think of ourselves as English first & British second-so William would say he was English. Ok English lesson over I like the idea of the story and sorry to be critical

Author's Response: Hi scaryscouse! I would like you to know that I appreciate the little things that you’ve pointed out. I didin’t mean to offend anyone by making William sounding more mature. I just found it a little funny if William spoke that way even if he was just a child since William/Spike to me is really a unique character and all of his terms of endearment like pet, luv are all just used to emphasize that it is really Spike who is speaking. You’re right, I’ll keep in mind of using the word mum instead of mom. So glad you and the rest of those who reviewed liked the story so far.

Very cute start. Update soon please.

Good job, I really like the beginning I hope to see alot more of this story soon.