Date: 07/09/2006 - 06:59 pm Title: The Guy In Question
Great story so far. Can't wait for updates!
Date: 07/09/2006 - 08:33 am Title: The Guy In Question
Not sure what I think yet, but I do like where this is going.
Date: 07/07/2006 - 05:48 am Title: The Guy In Question
Love it so far. I will definitely be looking for more.
Date: 07/07/2006 - 03:06 am Title: The Guy In Question
Maybe Dru was just playing with her. If I were Buffy I wouldn't trust a word she said. Great Chapter. Please update soon.
Date: 07/06/2006 - 11:01 pm Title: The Guy In Question
Oh, I see Spike doing a nice shag dance with Dru.....since his sunshine is engaged to another man he will need some womanly comfort, and not be thinking straight on what he really needs........kick Riley's ass and caveman carry Buffy back to his lair and have his way with her...LOL.........I see Xander is the only one that sees the true of Spike's feelings for Buffy. more please
Date: 07/06/2006 - 09:07 pm Title: The Guy In Question
Great chapter! Can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 07/06/2006 - 06:51 pm Title: The Guy In Question
Great chapter! This should be quite interesting indeed. The only comments I have in the way of constructive criticsm is that your tenses change in sentences -- past/present. With a beta or careful eye, that would clean up the story nice :)
Author's Response: Yup thanks Brat. gotta watch that.
Author's Response: Whoa! I just checked it and you were right! I hope I was able to correct most if not all of them. Thanks again!