Date: 10/25/2006 - 10:43 pm Title: Picture Perfect
continues !!!!!!!!
Date: 10/25/2006 - 01:42 am Title: Picture Perfect
Thanks for another great chapter. More soon please...
Date: 10/25/2006 - 12:29 am Title: Picture Perfect
salut eille ton histoire est génial continue jadore !!!!!!
Date: 10/24/2006 - 08:50 pm Title: Picture Perfect
Oh, I love the plot twist. Great chapter, can't wait for more.
Date: 10/24/2006 - 05:42 am Title: Picture Perfect
Sneaky man, following his girl...I hope Buffy can put a voice to what she really feels, so that Spike doesn't get a broken heart.
Date: 10/24/2006 - 04:04 am Title: Picture Perfect
AHHH! I just want to scream at Spike to just tell her. lol I love the song by the way.
Date: 10/24/2006 - 03:46 am Title: Picture Perfect
wish that they werent there
Date: 10/24/2006 - 02:44 am Title: Picture Perfect
I actually love the song you used. I think it describes pretty well what Spike was feeling at the moment.
Love the plot. Keep up the good work!
Date: 10/24/2006 - 12:40 am Title: Picture Perfect
Yay! Buffy wants to call off her wedding! Knew a missing Dru wasn't good. Great chapter!
Date: 10/23/2006 - 11:42 pm Title: Picture Perfect
great chapter..enjoyed the photo play..cant wait to see whats in store!!!
Date: 10/23/2006 - 10:56 pm Title: Picture Perfect
I like the way this story is unfolding. Very creative. I'm guessing Dru has something to do with Riley being their all of a sudden. Great update!
Date: 10/23/2006 - 10:53 pm Title: Picture Perfect
I love this story so much. I hope to see an update real soon.
Date: 10/23/2006 - 10:16 pm Title: Picture Perfect
I loved the photo shoot. It was cute. I'm wondering what Dru and Riley are up to, and why they are together in the first place. Looking forward to more.
Date: 10/23/2006 - 08:56 pm Title: Picture Perfect
Thanks for a great update ... I am going to go back a reread the previous chapters because I think that I've forgotten just how Dru fits into this whole story.
Anyway, I love the plot and the direction that you are taking it in ... very original. I am not so much with the grammar criticism as I tend to fix things in my mind ... as long as the story is a good one AND THIS ONE REALLY IS then I just tend not to let it bother me.
I hope that there is not a whole lot of angstyness ahead for your adorable couple as their entire friendship has always had some measure of angst to it ... building as the years have progressed. Hopefully with so many people noticing what a dynamite couple they make and with Glory on their side things will work smoothly in their favor and much Spuffyness will ensue. (that's just me being hopefull)
Thanks for putting so much work into entertaining us out here ... this truly is a great story.
Date: 10/23/2006 - 08:32 pm Title: Picture Perfect
I really like this story, and I hope you don't take this the wrong way; but you should really consider getting a second beta. One who is good with grammar and can keep an eye on your tenses. You constantly switch between present and past tense, sometimes even in the middle of a paragraph, and it's really taking away from the story.
Aside from that it's a cute story and fun to read. Looking forward to more.