*shudder* That is one hell of an experience... I would absolutely HATE being in a situation like that. Poor Buffy! This method of torture is meant to drive its captive insane - I thought before these people would only try to convince her otherwise, but never this... this method is so barbaric and cruel.

Excellent chapter... it was intense and I love it. I'll be looking forward to more!

Author's Response: It's not really meant for insanity (though it could easily go that way) but more to disorient; it's more about loosing track of time and eventually convincing yourself there's no hope. But it's not fun. Thanks for sticking with it.

The plot twist is very, very disturbing & distressing. This isn't a flame--I'm sure you intentionally set out for some major angst, and you have achieved it. Your words do an excellent job to paint a vivid picture, even though you are describing a completely dark room. It seems pretty clear that her captures were religious zealots, based on the previous chapter. I respect other people's beliefs and opinions, and I respectfully ask that you consider other people's beliefs, also. As a Christian, I always cringe when Christians are portrayed in a horrendous light. But the reality is, anything taken to extreme is going too far. It will certainly be interesting to see where Will and Spike take it from here-- I like Buffy's ponderings about if they think she's left them, and would they move on. I can't wait until she sees how fiercely protective they are of the ones they love! I think you know I'm a big fan of all of your works, so please consider my comments in light of that fact. Looking forward to reading the next chapter in this interesting twist which I didn't see coming. Hoping you'll also post more Haven soon. Cheers!

Author's Response: I always consider other's beliefes when I do anything. This isn't about christianity; it's about extermism and making judgments about others. It wouldn't exactly work if Buffy was kidnapped by Muslim extermists, ya know? And when people hate, they usually need to find something to justify their hate...because they know it's wrong.

great job on this part!!
Hey guys, chapter 20 is here!
http://ebontier.tripod.com/twinlets4.html#20

Author's Response: lol, thanks. And I see you've found my personal site, that's always a bit ahead of this one...

*whimpers and hides* I hope there's a happy ending...

Author's Response: Have faith in the Spuffy. Be strong with the Spuffy!

Oh my gosh. Where is Buffy? Who's taken her and how long has she been there? Is she going to be okay? What are Will and Spike doing? They must have noticed her gone already! I can't wait to see how this goes! Update soon please!

Author's Response: My head's spinning with the questions! But I have them all answered, so...keep reading!

Well I am curious as to who is doing this but I missed my twins in this chapter. I hope they are worrying about their Buffy.

Author's Response: Next chapter, I promise.

i liked how you dealt with buffy's reaction at being abducted. this is a sad truth, but almost always the worst side of being kidnapped isn't the physical one... they can starve you, drug you, leave you alone in the dark for ages or even beat you. Still, nothing broken you as the certainty your loved ones have, somehow, forget you.
do u think i can love this chapter... and hate a little bit the author? really not much luv, i promise! ;D

Author's Response: Yep. What we come up with in our minds is always scarier than the reality.

Wow. This is seriously intense. What are they doing to her? How long has she been in there? Please let Spike and Will find her!!!

Author's Response: So many questions, so many answers...just in future chapters.

I don't hate you at all. I've just read this along with the prequel and found it to be a pleasantly fluffy yet steamy distraction. Now it's turned sinister and I adore it!

Author's Response: Yay! Thanks for sticking with me, makes me feel all warm and fuzzy.