[Report This]Date: 01/25/2007 - 04:07 pm Title: Into the Light
Wow. I clicked to read the reviews expecting people to rant over the religion stuff, but instead I read more about complaints on 'pace'.
Frankly people, fanfic writers don't get paid to write stories for us to read(not all the time, at least). At least try to appreciate it even if u find some parts of the story hard to swallow.
After some consideration, I do agree that the pace for Buffy's kidnap was a little dragged out, but haven't you guys read longer novel-length fics?
I for one thinks this fic is bloody brilliant. And not just for the smut. I make it a point to NEVER read WIPs because I don't want to suffer from nasty withdrawals, but I simply couldn't help myself after reading Singlets.
Thanks Xela, I hope you'll grace us with a completed Twinlets fic soon xD
Rgds,
Jen
Author's Response: Yeah, I was actually expecting more religion fall out as well. Pleasantly surprised there. Thanks for the review; but as for the pace, I had to set up things like Dawn and i truly felt in order to gloss over a long and protracted healing period for Buffy that I had to give her some kick-ass moments with supportive people. Thanks for this review!
[Report This]Date: 11/29/2006 - 01:54 am Title: Into the Light
hurry up and update don't leave me in suspense... do they find her?
Author's Response: But of course. I would never seperate the Spillfy permenantly. They're way too much fun to write!! I just need to set it up the rescue credibly.
[Report This]Date: 11/27/2006 - 11:29 pm Title: Into the Light
The plot continues... I loved the update. Yes, like many of your readers I enjoy smutty goodness (especially since you are so good at writing it). However, I really like how the angst and the pace is building tension and additional emotional substance to your story. Not only does it enrich the characters but it also enhances the overall story.
I also like how you incorporated Caleb into the story. Can't wait for your next update.
Author's Response: Thank you. I find that Caleb is a bit under-used. But I really appreciate your comment, and I'm really glad you like the story.
[Report This]Date: 11/27/2006 - 07:24 pm Title: Into the Light
Sweetie, at one time or another I think every fic writer has had to endure the dreaded flame chapter. Just remember for every one flame or negative remark, ten other people are reading, enjoying, and trusting the writer.
Sometimes, I see in comments some of the more overzealous readers trying to persuede the writer to reach a conclusion faster than they writer intended. While some are ill intentioned, I don't think the majority are trying to be mean spirited, but just so invested in the characters that they are impatient to see what happens to their character.
This should indicate to you that your story is compelling, the characters well written, and slow pacing or not - people *are* reading. They are so interested in your story that they can't wait through one plot heavy chapter to see what happens. Wow.
Spin it positive, don't get discouraged. I will be looking forward to the next chapter.
Cheers,
Nina
Author's Response: Thank you. I really appreciate that. It just irks me when people say demeaning things and then expect someone else to listen or respond in the way they want; I mean, it just doesn't make sense. Really, thanks for the comment. It made me smile!
[Report This]Date: 11/27/2006 - 02:50 am Title: Into the Light
cant wait for them to rescue buffy
Author's Response: You'll have to wait a bit more, but it will happen.
[Report This]Date: 11/27/2006 - 02:37 am Title: Into the Light
Hopefully we'll find out who did this to Buffy! Great chapter!
Author's Response: Oh, we definitely will. And there will be hell to pay Thank for hte review.
[Report This]Date: 11/26/2006 - 06:01 pm Title: Into the Light
Ok - I am seriously surprised by some of the reviews.
The pace is NOT too slow; rather to my perspective, it is building the tension and horror of Buffy's predicament. Of course I desperately want Buffy to be resuced and reunited with her lovers; however if that were to happen immediatley there wouldn't be much of a story. Furthermore, if Buffy's kidnapping had only been for the duration of one chapter, surely it would have seemed forced and merely a triviality?
The addition of some considerable plot has enhanced this story from a steamy albeit very well-written bit of fluff, to something of genuine substance.
The inclusion of Caleb is perfect and I was suitably disturbed by the Stepford-nunness that is Mary.
Excellent update and well done for tackling an issue that is so rarely addressed but can cause so much damage.
Author's Response: I was too, especially in light of me asking people NOT to discuss it, which I suppose was a bit of hopeful naivety on my part...ubt we learn. Thank you for this comment; it's nice to read something with substance. And I agree, a one-chapter problem/resolution is a horrible idea, and it would take the level of the story down. And i'm really glad you liked Mary (well, in the sense of her role in the story.) Thank you, sincerely, for your comment.
[Report This]Date: 11/26/2006 - 03:16 pm Title: Into the Light
your pace sucks!
Author's Response: hahahah. Your review is trite, banal, and holds absolutely no weight with me. But it did make me laugh and roll my eyes; I haven't been able to do that a lot because the French aren't big on sarcasm or eye rolling. So thanks!
[Report This]Date: 11/26/2006 - 12:45 pm Title: Into the Light
I'm so glad you put your author's note in the beginning. People who think places like this don't exist are plan ignorant and give religion, as a whole, a stinking bad name. Great chapter, can't wait for Will and Spike to ride to the rescue!
Author's Response: Indeed. It amazes me how many people can live in denial of things that go on so close to them. Thank you for the review.
[Report This]Date: 11/26/2006 - 10:51 am Title: Into the Light
Well I for one do agree with the other comments concerning the slow pace but as someone said several times, what can we do about it ? Obviously the writer doesn't want to take it into account.
Author's Response: It's been three chapters; and solving hte problem of Buffy's kidnapping has to take time, otherwise it becomes ridiculous and predictable and would ruin the entire story.
[Report This]Date: 11/26/2006 - 06:23 am Title: Into the Light
Poor Buffy! She seemed scared out of her wits! I know I would. I love the plot woven into this - great chapter, and hope to read more. :)
Author's Response: Thanks. And sensory deprevation is quite scary...but she'll come through it OK, she's a tough cookie!
[Report This]Date: 11/26/2006 - 06:02 am Title: Into the Light
I agree, Angst is good for the soul, but Spillfy is good for the libido and my hubby thanks you for your talented Spillfy scenes!
As far as anyone flaming you for you "religious" segments in this tale? Well, they can stuff it. I've had friends in "religious" cults and I'm totally for annilating all CULTS - they are bad! and Cults that KIDNAP and hold people against their will with brainwashing and deprivation techniques are especially BAD! (so glad you used Caleb so we can all hate him!) I hope Buffy can hold out, or at least be recoverable when the twinlets figure out what's happening and find a way to get her out of there!
Personally, if my daughter (I don't have one, but if I did) decided to move in with 2 guys and become lovers with both of them and the 2 guys were also into an incestous relationship with each other as well as with my daughter - I'd be squigged out a bit, but I'd like to think that I'd support her right to live her life even if I didn't agree that is was best! My main concern would be marriage and children, how would that work? I guess they could always create their own "religion" and like the early Mormons allow more than one spouse (only reverse it that wives could have more husbands instead of one husband with multiple wives) I like that idea..Well, I'm rambling and really I just wanted to stay, I'm still loving it, "religious culty angst" and all! Thanks! more please. (Oooo, and maybe, just to keep us all high on sexual tension you could have Spike and Will remember some sweet Spillfy moments while they are trying to find Buffy? Well, just a selfish thought on my part -- please carry on with YOUR story YOUR way).
Author's Response: Yes, cults are very very bad. And this is fiction; we're allowed to bed all the rules. And I suppose marriage and children would be worked out between the trio; I personally don't believe in marriage because while my own parents aren't divorced, I've seen way too many of my friends suffer that. And you can considered yourself married without actually going through the official ceremony. What oyu believe is more powerful than the state. And I'm actually working on a series of stand-alones in the twinlets-verse...you know, stuff that I can't incorporate into the story because it just doesn't fit. So perhaps they won't have to remember. ;)
[Report This]Date: 11/26/2006 - 04:02 am Title: Into the Light
DAMN THESE ARE SOME CRAZY ASS MOTHER TRUCKERS!!!! i LOVE this story so much and am so happy that u updated. i cant believe that calebs the priest, hes so creepy. i really hope that buffy doesnt give into the crap that he's preaching and resists watever they want her to do. also i really hope that spike and william find her and save her and that everything works out and theyre happy together. please update as soon as u can, im DYING to read wat happens next. thanx
Author's Response: They'll be fine. I PROMISE you. I wouldn't break up my Trio. I like them way too much for that!
[Report This]Date: 11/26/2006 - 02:58 am Title: Into the Light
This is great........keep on writing
Author's Response: Thanks! I will, no worries.
[Report This]Date: 11/26/2006 - 01:19 am Title: Into the Light
I gotta say, I didn't expect to see so many negative comments about this chapter. I talked about the pace with Peter (another reader) but I thought I was impatient (well I'm never patient anyway) so I'm surprised so many people think like me. Maybe we are just all too impatient.
Author's Response: To be fair, I am keeping you on tenterhooks as far as how long Buffy's been there. And that could have a lot to do with it, because it seems like forever with Buffy, which is how I intended it, even though it has NOT been forever. So that could be adding to it.
[Report This]Date: 11/26/2006 - 01:15 am Title: Into the Light
So freaky! it that someone who "loves" you would put you though something like that. I don't even want to say anything about the freaky Religionist people.... will be seeing how Spike and William are doing? With Buffy it seems like she's been there for a long time, how long has it been? :)
Author's Response: People do some really interesting but misguided things in the name of love. And you'll find out how long it's been soon.
[Report This]Date: 11/26/2006 - 12:45 am Title: Into the Light
I'm still with you. As a reader, I understand where people are coming from when they say that too much angst puts others off from the story... but as a writer, I'd say keep doing what you're doing. This story's been captivating from the beginning, but I must say that while the smut was nice, I'm more interested with the plot and where you're going with this right now. So rock on!
Author's Response: Thanks :) I can understand that I ripped the Spillfy out of their world...but I did warn everyone. And it's going to make everyone stronger, so whatever. It will go ahead as it will.
[Report This]Date: 11/26/2006 - 12:27 am Title: Into the Light
Amen to the person who mentioned too much angst in the first place. Hey would someone be ok to write new chapters with a different version ?
Author's Response: What?
[Report This]Date: 11/26/2006 - 12:20 am Title: Into the Light
Well, I for one, am enjoying this fic. I knew something drastic had to happen, what with the way the meeting with Buffy's parents went and their meeting with Xander. Something had to happen. Can't wait for more and don't let anyone's comments get you down. It's your story. Screw everyone else.
Want to see more!!!
Author's Response: Thanks! And you'll see much more! Trust in the Spillfy! I won't premenantly split them up.
[Report This]Date: 11/25/2006 - 11:51 pm Title: Into the Light
I'm SO glad I'm not the only one to think it's SLOW!!!!!
Author's Response: And you left ME this comment...why?
[Report This]Date: 11/25/2006 - 11:31 pm Title: Into the Light
Poor Buffy. Exactly where is she and how long has she been there? Will Spike and Will find her in time or will it be too late? I hope they find her soon. She's going to be soooo traumatized. I can't wait for them to find her. Update soon please!
Author's Response: Questions you'll find the answer too! And ones that are BIG ones for Buffy (which is why they should be big ones for you!) Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 11/25/2006 - 11:10 pm Title: Into the Light
Oh no.. if I understood that A/N correct Buffy is in a group of "self-proclaimed Christians" that try to "deprogram" her because 'she had sinned'. For me that's only a sect but I fear they are good in "deprogramming" (brainwashing). I hope Buffy can resist them (won't believe them) and only pretend "to have been healed". We'll see.
I still wonder if it were her parents that betrayed (= wanted to save) Buffy. Or if it was Riley or all together? Looking forward to the next chapter, hoping that then help is on its way.
Author's Response: Sects are different from cults (at least in the english languages) Cult has a very bad connotation, while sect is more like a division in one larger group. thanks for the review, help's going to come!
[Report This]Date: 11/25/2006 - 10:37 pm Title: Into the Light
Too much angst can kill a story.Just hope the readers will stick with you cause I dont think I will. Disappointed
Author's Response: The disappointment apparently goes both ways.
[Report This]Date: 11/25/2006 - 10:32 pm Title: Into the Light
Don't you think you guys are a little unfair ? ok we're all unhappy about the pace but honestly what can we do about it ? At least, we could try to send constructive reviews. A friend of mine (the one who adviced to read this fic) decided to give up because she didnt like the angst (too much according to her). But maybe things will turn out better than we think.
Author's Response: I'm not against pointing out that Spillfy will still be together...and you might find that thier family grows in the end...I'm definitely not going to break up my trio over, well, anything. At all. So I don't understand the death/doom/destruction scenarios.
[Report This]Date: 11/25/2006 - 10:29 pm Title: Into the Light
Oh dear, my inner vixen is currently beating the hell out of Caleb. Ugh! Great chapter. Really well written. Looking forward to seeing how Will and Spike are faring. And I'm really looking forward to what Buffy will do once she's had time to readjust to life outside the hole. Also, I'm interested to know how long she was actually in there for.
Author's Response: Ah, yes, my big secret. I'm glad everyone's asking, because that's what Buffy's asking herself. :)
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