The nurse kept her word.. good that they are awake in time. Awe, Buffy is protected. Both Spike and William are quick to jump to defend her (the male nurse, the doctor). And the doctor scrared Buffy very good.
Even if Joyce worries for Buffy she hates the twins; that lead to bad things before. Buffy learned what Joyce did the hard way.
Buffy? The way her parents cared for her she is better off without them.

Author's Response: Yes, it's sad but true. Thanks for the review (oh look, I rhymed!)

First the doctor screws up then Buffy's parents barge in. How much do they expect her to take?? Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Wil and Spike may just have to whisk her off to Paradise to get her away from the idiots though.

I love it when Spike gets all growly like that. Yum!

I'm very glad to see that Buffy is still dealing with her ordeal and not just getting over it straight away. It's more realistic and gives great opportunities for Will and Spike to be all protective and caring.

More please!

Author's Response: Growly Spike is my favorite. That's why I make him do it. A lot. :D And Buffy will have some things to deal with, but most of what I did during her captivity was try and give her a cushion so it wouldn't be a protracted healing, you know? Thanks for the review.

Well, when you pull the whole "1 in 5000 will turn their head for Spillfy" think... what can I say! If I were the nurse, I'd be peaking from the closet... just to look at Spike and William in all their neked glory of course!...And if your fantasy story is filled with a hospital staff of sympathetics already, what's a bit of FBI operations stretching here and there. And if films and books about FBI procedures are anything to go by, they are way too boring to want to research anyway so I'm all with the making up your own! Look forward to a totally Spillfy epilogue! Thanks for such a YUMMY tale! Oh and I can I say, yea Spike! I would of preferred Buffy's parents be drawn and quartered or even "kidnapped and held hostage" in some radical religious sect themselves, but Spike's tongue lashing (now there's a yummy image) was nicely done and got the point across! Hopefully they will spending time in jail for conspiracy anyway for the next coupld of years so them visiting Buffy shouldn't be problem!

Author's Response: oh, this isn't done yet. I've got a few more tricks up my sleeve before this is done. And yeah, I wouldn't mind being tongue lashed by Spike at all. Or Will...or...both...

Ok, that ending kicked a$$!! Loved the slap!! They got exactly what they deserved! Can't wait for another chappy! Congrats for the amazing story!

Hugs,


Author's Response: Merci! the slap was more than deserved.

Creative liberties are fine by me! Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: haha, good. Because they make my story go forward! ;)

YAY THEY FINALLY TOLD THOSE BASTARDS TO FUCK OFF!!!! THEY DESERVE TO DIE FOR WAT THEY DID TO HER!!!! i love this story and am so happy that u updated. im so glad that theyre back together and that they'll be happy again. also im so glad that buffy slapt joyce she deserved it. i really hope that ben is a good guy and he doesnt do anything to hurt buffy, spike or will. also i hope that everything works out and that they are and stay happy together. please update as soon as u can, i cant wait to read wat happens next, thanx

Author's Response: Nah, ben just said a few stupid things and now he's gone. I'll take care of my characters, don't worry!

Great chapter.! Joyce and hubby should have both been slapped for what they did. There are a lot of nice nurses out there, it's just the job gets harder year after year. Hug a nurse and say Thank you next time you see one.

Author's Response: Yeah, I hear ya. And in my world, all nurses, doctors, and the like approve of Spillfy.

finally caught up with the story.... totally love the updates!!!!

Author's Response: Great! Gald you've liked it!