Okay, so it took a little longer to get this one up than I thought, but the point is that it's up, right?

Anywho, I really enjoyed how you segmented this chapter into the viewpoints of the three different parties present in the story. It was a lot more enjoyable than continuing to focus on one specific thread and just describing what the other parties were doing. It's much more alive and entertaining to see it for yourself!

The Louis/Clark part was incredibly interesting and reminded me of the way the two characters interacted in the Louis and Clark series with just a touch of the Smallville feel to it as well. My sister told me there's more with Louis later, so I'm looking forward to getting to it! I also enjoyed Clark's thoughts in the end, realizing all the different ways he had an impact on her life.

And the Lex part was so true to the movie it was great! You truly captured Kevin Spacey's portrayal of Lex brilliantly! And Kitty, her comments and Lex's responses were so comical I loved them!

And now to the Scoobies...I totally adored their reactions to Buffy's news of Superman! Everything from their facial expressions to their comments was just so hilarious and true to character! I could actually see Anya preening herself, trying to look good for Superman and Willow's comment...so so perfect. I laughed for like ever after that one! And the sex comments...wow, that was good. If you have time I totally recommend reading this article by Larry Niven entitled "Man of Steel, Woman of Kleenex" which pretty much describes what would happen if Clark and Louis ever had sex (if it were even possible). I just thought it was so hilariously fitting that I'd just read that article last night and then read this chapter today.

Anywho, to get back on topic, this was another brilliantly executed chapter with many many comical moments. Yet still you were able to get a feeling of seriousness across, showing that this was a serious threat, which is exactly what the show does. It was a very good mixture and I'm glad you aren't falling into the classical error of most crossover stories where they focus too much on the funny moments between the crossing characters and not enough on the plot (when they have one.) But thankfully yours continuously reverts back to the plot, despite the constant hilarious moments.

Keep it up!

Still think it sounds like fun. Lex is giving Vamps treatments to let them be in the sun - I think Spike needs another Gem! So are all the scoobies gonna be as dumb as Lois Lane and never figure out that Clark and Superman are the same guy? Well, beside the point. Looking forward to where this will all lead. More please.

i loved how (finally!) someone was engaged in a serious conversation with anya including.... sex, of course! lol

that was funny. lol post soon. great job. really cute

great chapter

I really enjoy the conversations in this story ! You can make it so much fun! Update soon please, can't wait to see the next!