awwwwwww

Oh yeah, way to lay on the plot thickening! Louis on the search for Buffy...now that is a purely wonderful and completely Louis action.

But what really interests me, though it may not even be important, is who caught the two of them together? I mean, not that it wouldn't be hard to spot the bright blue spandex suit, but still, someone saw them together, even took a picture of them. Was it possibly a set up? I can't really see a definite reason why, but I've learned with reading fanfic that anything's a possibility. Or, maybe I'm just over-analyzing everything and there's really nothing important about the statement at all and it's just a means to get the famed duo to Sunnydale.

The Buffy and Spike conversations was, again, brilliant and extremely witty. Obviously things still aren't worked out between Spike and Superman because he still has the same jealous feelings when conversation drifts towards Superman (and I get the feeling it drifts there a lot). Spike knows that Superman doesn't have any feelings for Buffy, but that doesn't necessarily mean that she doesn't have any for him. Then again, it could be the typical Superman euphoria that's making her act the way she is and not necessarily an inkling of attraction. I know I'd do the same thing if I ever saw him...

But the plot thickens! It's wonderful and I can't wait to read more! Poor Clark, trying to keep his secret away from a group of people who's job it is to find out all the secrets they can about strange people. Can't wait to see when he gets exposed! (That is if he gets exposed, but you wouldn't be that mean, would you?)

LOL... I loved Spike's response to Lois being surprised that a government agency knows about demons. I enjoyed reading Clark's musings about feeling a connection to Buffy. Can't wait to read more. Good update!

loved it. glad the truth is out in the open. those lies were really not believble. lol. great job. please PLEASE post soon. great job.

*nods* After reading the whole chapter: Lois isn't silly *gg* Now after she saw Spike she's after Buffy's secret :)

yup good job Spike. Great now they will have to come up w/ why there is a vampire oh wait thats pretty easy cause he has the chip so it should all work out. i hope they keep the whole Buffy and Spike relationship. great update can't wait to see what happpens later!

And you do it again, another great chapter. The first part, while insanely funny, was a bit on the random side, but my sister tells me that it's a necessary ingredient in a good Spuffy flick, so I forgive you. Besides, it was hilarious and highly entertaining!

I loved Spike's little speech about the Scoobies. It just seems a lot more powerful coming from someone like Spike. I mean Buffy or another one of the Scoobies saying it is one thing, but Spike? The fact that he isn't a member and isn't even liked by the majority of the members makes the speech all the more powerful. I mean, Spike could've just said it's a packaged deal and be done with it, but he actually goes on to say that they're all helpful, which makes it meaninful. And then there's the fact that he's saying it to Superman, which takes a level of bravery as it is because, I mean, it's Superman.

And then, again, you pull the seriousness back into comedy by including the lovely and comedic Anya dialogue. Then, you bring the focus right back to the plot with the final paragraph while including a little bit of the romance I know all the readers are looking for.

You're doing a fabulous job combining all the elements necessary for good story telling: comedy, romance, drama, good plot, good characters. Once the action emerges in later chapters you'll have the complete set!

Okay, so it took a little longer to get this one up than I thought, but the point is that it's up, right?

Anywho, I really enjoyed how you segmented this chapter into the viewpoints of the three different parties present in the story. It was a lot more enjoyable than continuing to focus on one specific thread and just describing what the other parties were doing. It's much more alive and entertaining to see it for yourself!

The Louis/Clark part was incredibly interesting and reminded me of the way the two characters interacted in the Louis and Clark series with just a touch of the Smallville feel to it as well. My sister told me there's more with Louis later, so I'm looking forward to getting to it! I also enjoyed Clark's thoughts in the end, realizing all the different ways he had an impact on her life.

And the Lex part was so true to the movie it was great! You truly captured Kevin Spacey's portrayal of Lex brilliantly! And Kitty, her comments and Lex's responses were so comical I loved them!

And now to the Scoobies...I totally adored their reactions to Buffy's news of Superman! Everything from their facial expressions to their comments was just so hilarious and true to character! I could actually see Anya preening herself, trying to look good for Superman and Willow's comment...so so perfect. I laughed for like ever after that one! And the sex comments...wow, that was good. If you have time I totally recommend reading this article by Larry Niven entitled "Man of Steel, Woman of Kleenex" which pretty much describes what would happen if Clark and Louis ever had sex (if it were even possible). I just thought it was so hilariously fitting that I'd just read that article last night and then read this chapter today.

Anywho, to get back on topic, this was another brilliantly executed chapter with many many comical moments. Yet still you were able to get a feeling of seriousness across, showing that this was a serious threat, which is exactly what the show does. It was a very good mixture and I'm glad you aren't falling into the classical error of most crossover stories where they focus too much on the funny moments between the crossing characters and not enough on the plot (when they have one.) But thankfully yours continuously reverts back to the plot, despite the constant hilarious moments.

Keep it up!

Aww...just lovin it brat...really love this Spike, not the bloody leather...catch on Buffy!!!....poor Lois...at least Clark got to care for her....jusdt keeps getting better and better...update soon, *please*:)

Spike will defently find out that Clark is Superman. there is no way that he can't cause of his smell and his "'enhanced' vampire eyeballs" to see that there the same. Great update and i just LOVE your story. Especially since Spike told Louis that there a couple they will ahve to do couple things. :) This is SO GREAT!!!!!

great chapter

great chapter, very fluffy! update soon, puts a smile on my face everytime i see a new chapter up =)