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Reviewer: wall_flower Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/03/2006 - 08:03 pm Title: Chapter 2

“Just look at them…if they were ten years older, I’d be worried!”

Perfect chapter- this is everything I'm looking for in a nice end-of-a-long-day fanfic right now =) Love it!

Reviewer: wall_flower Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/03/2006 - 07:48 pm Title: Chapter 1

This is so adorable! Exactly what I needed after a long, harsh day :) Besides, it's about time I started to read this one!

I love the brutal honesty you can exibit with kiddie characters. I laughed my socks of at Angel's “I hate Riley, he smells!”- it was so obviously what Angel has always wanted to say! Loved it!

And little buffy and spike are unbelievably cute! I'm sure I'll adore this one!! xxx

Reviewer: Naomi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/03/2006 - 12:27 pm Title: chapter 18

OO, when do you update?
I will admit i preferred this story when they were cute toddlers, and in my opinion it would have been a good drabble with them just as toddlers, but i like the way this story is going.
Please update soon
Avid reader!

Reviewer: cheysma Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/02/2006 - 05:56 pm Title: chapter 18

This is taking interesting turns. I can't wait for more.

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/02/2006 - 04:13 am Title: chapter 18

Loved the chapter! A jealous Buffy is always interesting. I look forward to finding out where things go from here.

Reviewer: Brittney Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/02/2006 - 01:33 am Title: chapter 18

Glad to see an update. I was so used to frequent ones that I thought you had given up on us. I can't wait to see some Spuffy action (hint hint) :)

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/01/2006 - 10:56 pm Title: chapter 18

Wonder what's wrong with William. Great chapter!

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/01/2006 - 10:40 pm Title: chapter 18

Good to see you updating again :)
And Buffy got jealous of Holly (she is really annoying, Holly I mean).
And not Buffy and William ah well how should I put it? Things are changing? They didn't argue but they weren't okay either.

Reviewer: JustMe Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/01/2006 - 10:24 pm Title: Chapter 4

While I like the story, it's adorable, I couldn't continue to read it. The punctuation errors drive me friggin' crazy.

I understand when you're writing, you just want to get it out and worry about the small things later, but maybe you should try a beta?

Other than that, your idea is wonderful, and the story is very enjoyable.

Reviewer: Chosen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/01/2006 - 09:20 pm Title: chapter 18

I'm really glad to see this update, since this is one of my favorite fics. Hmm, I hope nothing happens between Will and Holly, loved Buffys name for her :"little-miss-let-me-shove-my-tits-in-your-face"..Hope you update soon again

Reviewer: ash Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/01/2006 - 04:22 pm Title: chapter 18

great chapter!

Reviewer: Jon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/01/2006 - 04:12 pm Title: chapter 18

Uh-oh...looks like Buffy's got an attack of the green-eyed monster! More please, soon!!!

Reviewer: tammy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2006 - 01:43 am Title: chapter 17

please update soon. I am really getting into this story.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/24/2006 - 07:03 pm Title: chapter 17

Good to see Chad and Marco are clever, trying to find a way out of the gang. ~ Mmmh-hmmm Buffy wants her new friends to believe that she and William are a couple, not brother and sister (well step-siblings, not blood related) because she don't want to get into a relationship. Interesting. :)
How bad for Cordelia that she trusts Angel. She'll be disappointed. He isn't trustworthy. Too bad she didn't see him read her diary. Yeah, she'll regret ever getting together with him.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/24/2006 - 03:05 pm Title: chapter 17

Cordelia will find herself in a lot of trouble hanging out with Angel! Great chapter!

Reviewer: MARGARET Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/24/2006 - 03:01 pm Title: chapter 17

THANKS FOR THE UPDATE

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/24/2006 - 08:43 am Title: chapter 17

You're doing a great job of fleshing out Angel's character, he really is a jerk and nothing but trouble. Learning more about him makes me worried about what's gonna happen when Buffy returns home. Good update.

Reviewer: BSuger Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/24/2006 - 05:34 am Title: chapter 17

This is good but do you have to spend over half of the chapter on Angel and Cordelia. Really a lot of that stuff can be skipped. What you want to go into detail on is the Spike and Buffy parts. Please please please consider your audience.

Author's Response: Without giving the plot away, i need you to see how Angel and Cordelia's relationship is, to how he reacts to when Buffy gets back from New England. If I'd have left it at he just considers her a 'bang' or a quick shag, then it wouldn't make sense to the plot, so please have patience.

Author's Response: I hope you stick with it, you'll be rewarded!

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/23/2006 - 11:07 pm Title: chapter 17

Wow...Cordelia has become quite the actress! Update soon please!

Reviewer: ash Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/19/2006 - 03:42 pm Title: Chapter 16

they are so lucky that they met benny...loved the chapter...

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/19/2006 - 08:52 am Title: Chapter 16

William and Buffy sure were lucky to meet someone as kind and helpful as Benny. I enjoyed the glimpse into William's head, looks like we finally know William's feelings for Buffy are more than just brotherly. I can't wait to see where things go from here. Wonderful chapter!

Reviewer: Shazza Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/19/2006 - 08:32 am Title: Chapter 16

I thought, i'll just make myself a sandwich and read the chapter.....i've just had to send out for take-away - and i KNOW i'll get a headache from the MSG, but i just HAD to have a Chinese!!! Hmmmmmmmmm dim sum!!

Reviewer: rosie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/19/2006 - 02:27 am Title: Chapter 16

cant wait to see what happens next!!!!!!!

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/18/2006 - 10:02 pm Title: Chapter 16

Tell the truth: Did you get hungry writing this chapter and the last? *grins* The menu did sound good *gg* And William even met another student. ~ Wow rain and thunder.. a lot of it and now they are out of power. ~ So both did some thinking about the other yet thinking it will be against the law. Well exactly " is my sister / brother " .. but only in the eyes of the law, not blood related. (That should them be able to marry, or?) Awe, they were very lucky! Buffy got a job and the found a place to live. ~ Loved the chapter :) And Buffy hasn't checked why William is feeling so awkward yet. *g*

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/18/2006 - 06:21 pm Title: Chapter 16

Loved the chapter! Please update soon!

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