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Reviewer: Lolalovesspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/18/2006 - 05:44 pm Title: Chapter 16

I could just go a Chinese take-away now - i'm starving! Great news about the job and place to live - more please!!!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/14/2006 - 08:17 pm Title: Chapter 15

Loved the chapter! Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: ash Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/14/2006 - 12:04 am Title: Chapter 15

loved the chapter...the move seems to be working so far..more soon plz!!!

Reviewer: rosie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/13/2006 - 10:32 pm Title: Chapter 15

cant wait to see what happens next!!!

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/13/2006 - 09:31 pm Title: Chapter 15

Well I have to go to bed so hopefully I resist (and go to bad hungry) ;-)
Lol and fussing Joyce is fun; typical worried mum. ~ The food sounds yummy :) ~ Yeah, I can understand that William is relieved that Buffy never slept with Angel. Even if he doesn't know yet why he is so relieved. No place to live found yet; but a fun chapter to read :)

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/13/2006 - 09:03 pm Title: Chapter 15

I'm loving William and Buffy's trip so far. Fantastic chapter! :D

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/13/2006 - 08:51 pm Title: Chapter 15

They seem to be having fun! Update soon please!

Reviewer: Kings of Mercia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/13/2006 - 06:42 pm Title: Chapter 1

We LOVE this story - and YOU, Mac 1 have got the most ENORMOUS chip on your shoulder - how DARE you tell people how to react! The other person attacked the story and the author defended herself, which she is quite entitled to do.

anyway, keep up the great work LoobyLoo!!!

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/12/2006 - 12:49 pm Title: Chapter 14

*gg* Angel can't stand being told no, huh? And Parker had to suffer. And at last, later, Angel did one thing too much; now Angel is in trouble. The coach will see to that. ~ And Parker knows now that Buffy will go with William. How long will it take till the rest knows? ... :) ~ Looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/12/2006 - 08:38 am Title: Chapter 14

Good update. Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: ash Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/12/2006 - 01:49 am Title: Chapter 14

loved the chapter!!!...angels starting to weird me out...cant wait till next chapter!!!

Reviewer: Jon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/12/2006 - 01:26 am Title: Chapter 14

Um, can i just say OW! Angel's 'encounter' with Parker made my eyes water! Loving this!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/11/2006 - 09:16 pm Title: Chapter 14

So glad Buffy and William will be going together! Great chapter!

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/11/2006 - 09:02 pm Title: Chapter 14

I'm glad Buffy;s going with William. Update soon please!

Reviewer: rosie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/11/2006 - 08:47 pm Title: Chapter 14

cant wait to see what happens next!!

Reviewer: SpaceLord Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/11/2006 - 07:39 pm Title: Chapter 14

Hmm I like the story but why do I feel like this is taking place in England rather than the US? I mean the way Angel and his gang talks it feels more like English English than American English.

Reviewer: Mac 1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2006 - 01:36 pm Title: Chapter 1

Looby - seriously, you were in the wrong in your response to Mlle in chapter 11, and she did not deserve the pure hatred you showered upon her in your response then. You started this kerfuffle, and now she's thoroughly pissed off with you. If you had simply responded originally with something like, 'Really? You're getting that I am against working mothers from this fic? That was not intended at all. I myself....etc. It's just that in this fic the characters are a particular way, or have a particular mindset, etc, it's not my own personal viewpoint, etc' then you'd have a real response to a real reader's concern. Instead you called her terrible names for even raising the subject. You are reading far too much into what she originally wrote, and you missed a good opportunity to explain your point of view in the fic to her. None of this need have happened if you'd simply responded to what she actually said without projecting yourself into it. From a bystander-reviewer's point of view, this was pretty glaring. Plus, you pointed it out in the tagboard so that even people who weren't reading the reviews would come and see what you told her. If you really are the age you say you are then really it does not become you to behave in such a
manner.

Author's Response: Terrible names? - I called her a moron, and that goes for you too - it's a STORY for goodness sake - i write to relax, although i seem to be getting precious little relaxation out of it at the moment

Reviewer: mlle Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/08/2006 - 10:30 pm Title: Chapter 11

If you're reading checking the reviews to decide whether to read this story, let me help you out. Yes, you should definitely read it.

That is, if you like pure wish fulfillment and treacle, if you don't mind character worship of William and character bashing of Riley, Angel, and any woman who's not a caretaker, and if you really groove on authors who will only let positive reviews stand. This is the story for you.

If, on the other hand, you value literary craft, characterization, and proofreading in your stories, then you might wish to look elsewhere.

There now, that's a review worth deleting. See the difference, dear author?

Author's Response: Blimey, you REALLY have an axe to grind, don't you? - FYI I have NEVER had children. It was a decision my husband an myself came to 22 years ago, and have never regretted it. So i'm not a 'caretaker' . I've NEVER had what you would call a 'career' either - i'm a housewife and cook, who likes to write stories - that's all. See the thing is, you can contact me - i don't hide behind 'anonymous' reviews. I hope you feel safe in your ivory tower, dolling out your bile and vitriol - tell me do you do this because you're lonely?

Reviewer: mlle Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/08/2006 - 10:23 pm Title: Chapter 1

Why was my previous review removed? I was critical, but I was polite. Shouldn't the remove feature be reserved for flames, not just criticism?

Author's Response: If you're looking for your other one, the one where you're not so polite, you put it under chapter 11 - although god knows why........i just don't want you to think I deleted it

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/08/2006 - 10:11 pm Title: Chapter 13

Well Angel showed once more that he is egoistic. And lying ("you can't get pregnant") ~ Good solution, Buffy going with William. So they don't have to be apart and he still can go. ~ Looking forward to the next part (and to Willow's plan).

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/08/2006 - 04:07 pm Title: Chapter 13

Just found your fic and absolutely love it! Can't wait for the next update!

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/08/2006 - 03:29 pm Title: Chapter 13

I felt so bad for Cordy in his this chapter, Angel is such a jerk! The scientific experiments sound like fun, I can't wait to find out happens to Angel and his friends.
I love the fact that William is taking Buffy with him, i'm really looking forward to finding out what happens to them when they're on their own. Good update!

Reviewer: margaret Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/08/2006 - 03:07 pm Title: Chapter 13

still a great story, can't wait to see what the plan is to get back at angel

Reviewer: spufette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/08/2006 - 01:45 pm Title: Chapter 13

I just love William in this. What a true 'friend' he is to Buffy and how well he watches out for her.

Sadly, I don't think teenage girls realize how wonderful it is to have an older brother in their lives.

My two girls never had the luxery of that and it's very telling. This is why I encourage friendships between teen girls and boys; the boys tend to step in as older brother mentors and watch out for the girls.

It sounds silly and anarchaic, I know, but some things don't change in the world. Girls need the positive influence and advice of a wiser guy to help them handle their own situations in life.

I love this story, I truly do.

spuf

Reviewer: Lolalovesspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/08/2006 - 12:09 pm Title: Chapter 13

Angel is SUCH a creep! -an Buffy is going with William - Brilliant!!! Great chapter - more please and SOON! Loving it!

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