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Date: 10/27/2007 - 10:42 am Title: Chapter 8

Loved the Chapter.

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Date: 10/26/2007 - 11:24 pm Title: Chapter 7

Oh so now we will be getting a wedding too, I am so happy for her mother.

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Date: 10/26/2007 - 08:47 pm Title: Chapter 6

OH that is cute, It will almost be a shame to see them grow up.

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Date: 10/26/2007 - 08:22 pm Title: Chapter 5

The nurse Buffy stuff was cute.

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Date: 10/26/2007 - 05:58 pm Title: Chapter 4

That is sweet I hope nothing stops them form getting him.

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Date: 10/26/2007 - 05:39 pm Title: Chapter 3

Did we come up on August already, I thought it would be farther away. I can't wait till he is adopted.

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Date: 10/26/2007 - 05:20 pm Title: Chapter 2

Oh it is going to be sad when he has to go back.

Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/26/2007 - 05:06 pm Title: Chapter 1

I was unsure about this story, until one of the kings suggested I read it, I thought they stayed children, so now I have time to read it.

I feel so sad for William, I even started to cry a couple times because of what he went through.


That class is a bunch of monster, and they have babies too. Only 2 teachers that is a bit much, and might not even be legal. But then again up here all the kids would already be in the second year of school. I thought they were only about 2 or 3 until they said William was 5.

Reviewer: Anna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/12/2007 - 08:01 pm Title: Chapter 16

I'm really enjoying this story. It gets a little distracting sometimes though, when you use so many non-American expressions (when not spoken by William) or describe school or college according to non-American practices (e.g. going to High School at 11, taking university-specific examinations, etc.) , that I'm often taken aback when I am reminded that they live in California. I am really liking this story and I know this is not an essential part of it. Just wanted to mention it and I hope you are not offended by it.

Reviewer: sc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/01/2007 - 10:49 pm Title: Chapter 33 and Epilogue

I really liked this fic. When I first began reading it, I was contemplating whether to continue or not because I thought it was a pg sibling love fic. I'm glad I went on and absorbed all the spuffy love. Great story!

Reviewer: sta Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/04/2007 - 09:27 pm Title: Chapter 33 and Epilogue

It was amusing to read because it was so clearly British. All the Americans spoke with British slang and phrases so it was sometimes hard to picture them as there original characters. They had their own strengths, though. I think the subplots with the other characters seemed to just get lost, but that didn't detract from the story because I didn't want to read more about them in the end anyway - but I kept waiting for Angel to be held accountable for his crimes. I liked little Buffy and William, but was glad to see them finally grow up - their escapades became tedious even if their interactions and relationship did not. I enjoyed the side characters and their life in Boston, but I think that some more angst would have added more interest to the story.

Reviewer: Tanja Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/27/2007 - 07:11 am Title: Chapter 33 and Epilogue

I really loved this story, especially the first chapters when B & W were kids. God, they were just SO darn cute! Thank you so much for sharing this beautiful story with us and please, keep up the amazing work!

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/24/2007 - 05:40 am Title: Chapter 33 and Epilogue

Loved the ending! Fantastic story! Can't wait for your next one. :D

Reviewer: zombiegirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/24/2007 - 02:13 am Title: Chapter 33 and Epilogue

Loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Wounderful story.

Reviewer: DK Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/24/2007 - 12:40 am Title: Chapter 33 and Epilogue

It is a great story. thank you for sharing. It was nice they found each other at such a young age and it was true love and respect between them and their parents. So what does your wonderful imagination have in store for us now? I'll be looking for another story from you. Until then have a great summer.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/23/2007 - 08:45 pm Title: Chapter 33 and Epilogue

Adored your fic! Sorry to see it end!

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Date: 05/23/2007 - 05:26 pm Title: Chapter 33 and Epilogue

William is clever :) I don't now it that thing that shuts down stolen mobile phones exists but it sounds neat :) (Uh-huh? Wrong medicine.. that one thing that should never happen and yet it does. That's really sad.)
And when their parents are coming they have to tell the truth.... I wonder if they'll tell how much money they have spent *gg*
They took it rather well, their parents. But Buffy said it all along: William is hers :)
Thank you, I loved it very much, enjoyed reading it.

Reviewer: PinkWink Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/23/2007 - 05:25 pm Title: Chapter 33 and Epilogue

Loved it best when they were kids, but you did a good job of them growing up too, sad it's finished!

Reviewer: Kaz78 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/23/2007 - 05:16 pm Title: Chapter 33 and Epilogue

loved it

Reviewer: Lolalovesspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/23/2007 - 05:13 pm Title: Chapter 33 and Epilogue

What a brilliant phone idea - I was mugged and had my phone taken wish I'd have had Will's idea for the phone! great story, so sweet at the beginning, and they get married - AWWWWWWW! thanks

Reviewer: Manda Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/23/2007 - 04:35 pm Title: Chapter 33 and Epilogue

That was a lovly story...sad to see it has come to an end. You did a great job with this one and I'm curious to see what you'll come up with next.

Reviewer: SpaceLord Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/23/2007 - 04:16 pm Title: Chapter 33 and Epilogue

Well I liked it a lot. The early parts were probably my fav though those were really sweet.

Reviewer: jamies_lady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/23/2007 - 01:59 pm Title: Chapter 33 and Epilogue

lovely ending, really liked the way Hank had already checked the legalities of them getting married.
brilliant work

Reviewer: Kings of Mercia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/23/2007 - 01:50 pm Title: Chapter 33 and Epilogue

Loved this story - is there going to be a sequel? - hint hint!!!

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/23/2007 - 01:42 pm Title: Chapter 33 and Epilogue

It was meant to be... enjoyed !!

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