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Reviewer: Raspy_Luv Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/02/2006 - 11:07 pm Title: first chapter

Wow! This is great! I love your writing style too. Very nice.

Reviewer: Nasim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/27/2006 - 05:50 pm Title: first chapter

Fantastic beginning! Look forward to the rest of the story!

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/27/2006 - 04:48 pm Title: first chapter

*waves hi* (R&R.)

Reviewer: luxferi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/27/2006 - 03:20 am Title: first chapter

HUH?! William? Blind? How?

Ok, I had to give in to that astonishing end to the first chappie, but actually I've wanted to say that this is AMAZING. Marisol, you're clearly very gifted as well. :) Definitely continue on... I'm dying to see where this leads to. But shame William's gotta be blind though... but oh, the mystery of the story! I love it so much. :)

Reviewer: sabrina Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/27/2006 - 02:30 am Title: first chapter

OH MY GOD!! that ending surprised the hell out of me. sry 4 saying that. but that was great even though it was a huge surprise. plz keep writing. but not toooo many chapters. cause i would luuuuv 2 know wat happens at thr end. hopefully buffy or elizabeth may come in quickly. plz no slashed either. i hope there is no other man in buffy's life. keep writing. hope u like this review. cause i luuuued the 1st chap. and it MUST continue.

Reviewer: ELLIE Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/27/2006 - 01:27 am Title: first chapter

Please continue!! I def wanna see where this is going!

Reviewer: Im_bloody_English Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/27/2006 - 01:20 am Title: first chapter

You've got my attention......... completely. Very original plot, I'm excited to see what direction you're going in with this. He's blind??? That certainly adds to his abilities. Hopefully you'll explain the cause of the blindness next chappy? Can't wait to see why this girl (assuming it's Buffy) popped into his head. Can't wait to see how they'll meet. I'll be watching closely for another update. And don't worry about the language barrier thing. From what I read, it doesn't seem to be an issue. You can always use MS word's feature of translation between any 2 languages. Good job, very very good job so far. Keep going, I need more to satisfy my curiosity.

Reviewer: jennybean Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/27/2006 - 12:50 am Title: first chapter

Very interesting idea. Wonderful start!

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/27/2006 - 12:31 am Title: first chapter

oh! oh! OH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU HAVE GOT TO POST SOON. THIS IS SOOOOOOO GOOD. REALLY REALLY GOOD. PLEASE CONTINUE. LOVED IT.

Reviewer: missus_grace Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2006 - 10:57 pm Title: first chapter

This is a great beginning. I vote for continuing!

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2006 - 09:27 pm Title: first chapter

Fantastic start! The premise of the story is really intriguing. Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: claire Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2006 - 08:58 pm Title: first chapter

oh wow!!! this is. . . just . . . brill!! i love it . it sounds like a really interesting story and i'd like to read more to find out wat else is gonna happen. really hope u update soon. i'll b looking out for more chaps !!!

Reviewer: Xela Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2006 - 08:38 pm Title: first chapter

Wow. Very cool start. Really can't wait to read the rest of this.

Reviewer: Jenn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2006 - 08:21 pm Title: first chapter

Very very interesting.........looking forward to more of this!

Reviewer: Spikes4Flowers Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2006 - 08:11 pm Title: first chapter

Outstanding opening to a story it's not like any other I have seen. I really would like to see where you go with this.

Reviewer: mikim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2006 - 08:07 pm Title: first chapter

This sounds very interesting. Totally unexpected especially the blind part. And I so hope that he didn't do that to himself. *shudders*
It was really nice: a nice beginning with an undercurrent of *something* that put me a bit ill-at-ease (but in the good sense as in "there's something hidden there and I wanna know what/how/why" kind of thing) but still drew me in.
very good job ;-)
mikim

Reviewer: aoife Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2006 - 07:56 pm Title: first chapter

oh wow, i don't think i've ever read a spuffy story anything like this. it sounds brilliant, i can't wait to read more!!

Reviewer: Vo6 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2006 - 07:36 pm Title: first chapter

He wakes up blind! How wiggie is that and still is drawing ok you have pulled me in hook line and Spuffy sinker. I have to get back to work but please please please add more

Reviewer: RecordBreakers Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2006 - 07:34 pm Title: first chapter

this is different never seen a Spuffy story like this before please TBC with it it be a shame if a great idea only had one chapter. a good sold opening that really pulls you in.

Reviewer: Calls to me Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2006 - 07:32 pm Title: first chapter

I was not expecting the blind part now I'm dying to see where you take this from here. Great writing style can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: Kalahara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2006 - 07:30 pm Title: first chapter

Oooooo! This story rocks! Has a great intro I wanna see more!

Reviewer: Sandy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2006 - 07:03 pm Title: first chapter

This is a very interesting and different story. I'm looking forward to more....soon?

As far as not being a 'native speaker' I think you have done very well; there were only a couple of mistakes

Keep up the good work.

Reviewer: klylu Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2006 - 06:59 pm Title: first chapter

wow! that's amazing! i always love it when i read a story so original and out of canon... even for an AU! lol
i wonder if buffy too will have hidden talents...

Reviewer: ash Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2006 - 06:34 pm Title: first chapter

simply wow...like really freakin wow...you had me the minute i started reading but the end...wow i love it excellent start...i am dying to read more...guess i'll have to wait..but for now i shall beg you to plz plz plz update soon!!!!!!

Reviewer: addielogan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2006 - 06:26 pm Title: first chapter

omg i did not expect that but it was awsome anyway keep it up

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