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Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/15/2007 - 09:03 pm Title: Tentative Friendship

Just wait till Spike finds out he was wrong.

Reviewer: turnedbyspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/05/2006 - 02:55 am Title: Tentative Friendship

oh god! he's getting the wrong idea again! you promise he'll find out the truth soon?? please?

Author's Response: Lol!!

Reviewer: ash Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/10/2006 - 04:35 pm Title: Tentative Friendship

loved it...the year book picture clicked something off in my head..i am probably wrong anyway but yeah loved the chapter!

Author's Response: Glad you liked :) Thank you for your consistant reviews!!

Reviewer: CrazyInLoveWithSpike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/10/2006 - 04:20 am Title: Tentative Friendship

I still love this story, pls update soon pls psl!! :D

Author's Response: Wish granted, I'll go and update right now hunny :]

Reviewer: CrazyInLoveWithSpike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/10/2006 - 04:19 am Title: Tentative Friendship

OOooOoHhh! this is gonna be good!! pls pls write the next chappy ! Why is it that people jump into so much conclusions before finding out the truth!! oh is he ever going to feel like s**t after he finds out!! this was a good chapter, since it leaves me asking for more!! and you said if we reviewed it would make you type faster so i'll leave this three times!! :D this is no . two, and I love your story so pls write the next chappy soon!

Author's Response: Ha ha- your 3x review is working it's magic over me!!

Reviewer: CrazyInLoveWithSpike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/10/2006 - 04:18 am Title: Tentative Friendship

OOooOoHhh! this is gonna be good!! pls pls write the next chappy ! Why is it that people jump into so much conclusions before finding out the truth!! oh is he ever going to feel like s**t after he finds out!! this was a good chapter, since it leaves me asking for more!! and you said if we reviewed it would make you type faster so i'll leave this three times!! :D

Author's Response: Lol- that might just work! Esepcially since I'm updating right now!! I'm so glad you're enjoying the story sweetie!

Reviewer: Aprilyn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2006 - 07:00 pm Title: Tentative Friendship

Good Chapter, I really hope Spike comes to his senses soon.

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing Aprilyn!!

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2006 - 04:43 pm Title: Tentative Friendship

Well if Spike thinks Buffy was in trouble... he started it. So maybe it was his fault, at last a bit. And now Buffy trusts Spike. Maybe too early. ~ Spike almost was suspicious about Dru. Too bad that he reacted wrong to the picture. He should check out the yearbooks. I guess it is Buffy in the picture. Till next chapter!

Author's Response: Lol- thank you for reviewing! Keep readin' hun :)

Reviewer: Mac 1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2006 - 02:23 pm Title: Tentative Friendship

First, I love the story. Post faster please. I have no talent for delayed gratification and I definitely need to read more now. And that was Buffy, wasn't it? And the death wishes were Dru's right? I know you won't tell us, and I am completely behind the author not telegraphing the plot as it's much more fun to read it in the story than to have the author spoil it for us, so don't tell us, write it, okay? But....really like the story. Now for the nitpicky. The word you're going for is 'spun', not 'span'. 'She spun around', not 'She span around'. If fixing it in any way delays getting the chapters out forget I said anything, though, because I have to know what happens next immediately. Thanks for sharing your story with us.

Author's Response: Oops, thank you for pointing that out- sometimes things like that just slip my mind, so thank you for letting me know. Thank you for reviewing :)

Reviewer: jenny Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/08/2006 - 09:49 pm Title: Tentative Friendship

i love your story so far and i can't wait to read more of it! please update soon! i can't wait to read when spike finds out what really happened and what he does to the people who did it. i'm pretty certain that the other people in that pic wrote the messages at the bottom about Buffy! update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing jenny; the next chapter will be up very soon. I'm glad you're enjoying the story hun!

Reviewer: elle Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/08/2006 - 07:47 pm Title: Tentative Friendship

gotta tell you i dont really leave reviews, it is quite rare for me but your story is an exception, i have been reading it since you first posted it.. its such a good story that i couldnt help but review anyways keep up the good work and hope u post a new chapter soon :)

Author's Response: Well that's awesome for me to know! I'm so very glad you reviewed my story elle- I'll post the next chapter very soon, since you asked so nicely :)

Reviewer: surfrchik275 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/08/2006 - 06:41 pm Title: Tentative Friendship

this story's goin great. do type faster. i wanna get to the part where spike humiliates buffy, then he finds out the truth and then he has to beg, on his knees, for her forgiveness. ahh to live vicariously. type faster!

Author's Response: Hah- someone's a little blood thirsty, oui? Lol- thank you for the awesome review surfrchik275! I'll type as fast as my little fingers will allow, though perhaps even faster now!!

Reviewer: Spuffy_obsessed Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/08/2006 - 06:41 pm Title: Tentative Friendship

Oh I have feeling that the person in that picture was really Buffy. And could it possibly be Drusilla that wrote those words. Or even Buffy if she has a self confidence issue. I hope Spike gets set straight if that is the case.

Author's Response: Don't worry, Spike will be discovering the truth [whatever the truth may be] veeeeeeery soon. Promise! Thank you for reviewing again s_o, it means a lot to me!! xxx

Reviewer: Klai Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/08/2006 - 06:16 pm Title: Tentative Friendship

God :)! When I read the chapter 4 was dedicated to me :)! I feel honoured ;)! Thanks! You says "awesome review", but it's easy to write an awesome review when the story is so great :)!

And another chapter so soon, it's a beautiful day :)!

Spike and Buffy's relationship seems like a dance: one step ahead, one step back.

Here, during these 2 last chapters, several steps ahead: Spike sees Buffy, talks with her. He realizes that she is beautiful, kind, bright under her "thicker skin ". He tries to repair his mistake after she was fired and helps her to find a job. And of course, question (another one!): why does she need a job? And question n° 2: why doesn't she want him to see where she lives? (Where "Harrison" lives?)

And he feels guilty? Good, very good...

But finally, what a end you give us! A GIGANTIC step back! When Spike looks at this photograph and decides Buffy is a monster full with hatred and perversion... Because he thinks it's obviously Buffy on this photograph.

I said previously that Spike has probably this mental disease called "the knight in shining armor" syndrome. It seems he has some serious problems of sight too. First, he can't see what is in front of him. Then, he confuses Buffy ("dirty, irrationally angry, bitchy and a slut who would sleep with any guy") and Dru ("beautiful, mysterious, victimised and in need of his protection"): quite the contrary ;)! . And finally, he has big difficulties to keep his eyes open. Hey, when he "closed his eyes, coming to a decision" concerning the revenge on Buffy; very symbolic...

Yes, again, I write a long review, but because it comes after 2 chapters! Thanks again :)!

Author's Response: I love the way you described Buffy and Spike's relationship as a dance- so true to form, I might just have to slip that metaphor in there [with your permission of course!] Your close attention to detail in your reviews make me feel so perfectly appreciated- it's like every single thing I intended to show, you have seen, and you have agreed with. It's intense! I rarely find someone who understands me and my writing so very well- so for that too- I thank you! It's great that you're still asking questions, and don't worry, because eventually they will ALL be answered [I promise!] and hopefully, when that time comes you'll leave another fantastically long review!! Thank you very much Klai- you deserved the chapter 4 dedication!! And thank you muchly for reviewing again! dee xxxx

Reviewer: rosie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/08/2006 - 05:32 pm Title: Tentative Friendship

please update soon!! i just love this story!!!

Author's Response: Thank you again rosie! The next update will be so soon- blink and you might just miss it :P Keep readin' hun!

Reviewer: claire Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/08/2006 - 05:07 pm Title: Tentative Friendship

oh no !!! things were goin so well !!!wow!! i love it !! i really liked that Spike was starting to feel differently towards Buffy and that maybe he should back out of the plan!!! but then things went all down hill from there poor Buffy!!!
great chap !!! cant wait for more!!!!

Author's Response: I know, what terrible luck? Still, things might get better again- I guess you'll just have to keep readin' to find out (see what I did there? lol) Thank you for reviewing again claire xxx

Reviewer: MARGARET Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/08/2006 - 03:43 pm Title: Tentative Friendship

GREAT PLOT TWIST, YOU'RE REALLY DRAWING US INTO THE STORY! PLEASE WRITE MORE SOON!

Author's Response: Sure thing Margaret! Keep a look out for the next chapter, it'll be up very soon! xx

Reviewer: Toni Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/08/2006 - 02:36 pm Title: Tentative Friendship

I love this story, good plot and characters, keep it up please!

Author's Response: Thank you Toni- keep reading!! xx

Reviewer: Calli Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/08/2006 - 02:35 pm Title: Tentative Friendship

I'm getting so sucked into this story. I can't wait to read more and find out what is really going on with Buffy. love it

Author's Response: Hee hee- thank you Calli :) I love that you're being sucked in! Next update will be very soon- promise!

Reviewer: Kimmie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/08/2006 - 02:18 pm Title: Tentative Friendship

Just found this story and I am so glad that I did. I love how you are developing these characters in such depth in such a short time span. Even though there are only four chapters posted I feel as though I have much more in my minds eye. I sense that there will be a great balance of Spuffyness and angst (cannot stand it when an author does the angst to the 10th degree bit) Looking forward to the next chapters. Also, thank you for not waiting so long inbetween posting chapters ... I think that tends to lose readers after awhile. Keep on rockin' ... great story telling from you so far.

Author's Response: Thank you very much Kimmie! I'm glad you found my story too! And I'm definately glad you're enjoying it so far- the next update will be up very soon, so keep an eye out for it :]

Reviewer: smg fan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/08/2006 - 01:58 pm Title: Tentative Friendship

o0o0 i think i know who the eprson is :D But i wont say anything because if im right i dont want to spoil it for anyone. Anyway,s i love the chapter, very angsty story, love it!

Author's Response: Lol- thanks smg fan- I wonder if you've guessed correctly... Suppose you'll just have to keep reading to find out!! Thank you for reviewing again love

Reviewer: demona424 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/08/2006 - 01:56 pm Title: Tentative Friendship

I have quickly become addicted to this story. Poor Buffy! I want to find out what happned, but I'll be patient. I hope he finds out sooner than later! But I can wait for that too. I look forward to more!

Author's Response: Ha ha- I'm glad to hear that I have you addicted! Don't worry, your next fix will be very soon :D

Reviewer: Raven Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/08/2006 - 12:53 pm Title: Tentative Friendship

Ooofff! This cannot be good. I'm guessing that the scribbled out girl was actually Buffy, and she wrote about hating her old self, or something like that. This sucks! Now, Spike is going to humiliate Buffy, and when he learns the truth, he'll feel guilty as all hell! Aaarrg! I can't wait to see what happens next! Please update asap!

Author's Response: Hee hee- next update very soon, so you can see if you were right or not! Thank you for the review Raven

Reviewer: Martina Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/08/2006 - 12:47 pm Title: Tentative Friendship

It's Buffy on that picture, isn't it? Great story, great writing, can't wait for more. Update soon, please.

Author's Response: I couldn't possibly say! Lol! Keep your eyes peeled for updates sweetie! xx

Reviewer: Laura Liz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/08/2006 - 12:21 pm Title: Tentative Friendship

ok...so, i was thinking exactly what you wrote in the end A/N ... i can't put my finger on who it could be though. the line...'i don't ever want to be like her' screams 'realative' to me...maybe a sister Buffy has that we don't know about...who may be dead already? Faith? :) i love this guessing game...so much fun!

i'm glad you put in the flashback to the first english class in there. i forgot about that and it help realize that the 'bookish' type person was who Spike thought Dru was in the first place.

again with more home life dodging...i love it when i'm right...and of course, Joyce as Spike's mom...obviously like that, as i mentioned in my last review. i hope Joyce and Buffy get close. still no mystery man / brother / child / pet??? that Buffy is hiding at home ... am i close? on any guess? :)

of course i hate that Spike is back on the plan now that he was just starting to like her...but that will change soon...right?? :)

ok thats my rant...you just bring the long reviews out of me!!

more please :)

Author's Response: Lol- and thank you very much for another long and perceptive review- those are my favourite kind! You were right about Joyce being Spike's mom- and you're definately on the right tracks when you think about her playing a bigger part later on, though I wouldn't want to ruin anything for you, so I'll just shh up now :] Again, thank you for another wonderful review, and do keep readin' :]

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