[Report This]Date: 10/20/2006 - 04:02 pm Title: And the tears come streaming down your face
Spike holding Caitlin? Cute :)) They are so happy... that made the doctor telling Spike that Joyce was gone even more sad. Sorry to see she didn't make it.
Oh my and then the just even were able to escape, everything seemed all right again and BAM! Glory happened! That doesn't look good for them.
Author's Response: Not good at all. Thank you for reviewing again sweetheart =]
[Report This]Date: 10/19/2006 - 11:08 am Title: And the tears come streaming down your face
Gahhh! Amazing evolution of their relationship, but what a cliff hanger. Looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks!
Author's Response: Awwh, thank you! And thank you for reviewing too =]
[Report This]Date: 10/19/2006 - 10:31 am Title: When you try your best but you don't succeed
Love your crazy Riley and the dialog. Great progress. THanks!
Author's Response: Thank you =]
[Report This]Date: 10/19/2006 - 10:23 am Title: Fix You
Nice dialog and a different spin. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thank you Pin
[Report This]Date: 10/19/2006 - 06:47 am Title: And the tears come streaming down your face
A heart-breaking end to Joyce's life, but very sweet the way the little family embraced baby Caitlin. And an interesting twist on the big vamoose out of town! I'm looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
[Report This]Date: 10/19/2006 - 06:24 am Title: And the tears come streaming down your face
oh, how sad. I was crying when they were told about joyce.
Author's Response: Bless you sweetie xx
[Report This]Date: 10/19/2006 - 03:08 am Title: And the tears come streaming down your face
very sad chapter with joyce dying but i wonder how glory knew where they were at
Author's Response: ... =]
[Report This]Date: 10/18/2006 - 08:54 pm Title: And the tears come streaming down your face
cant wait to see what happen next!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D
Author's Response: Hee hee!! Thanks rosie xx
[Report This]Date: 10/18/2006 - 07:33 pm Title: And the tears come streaming down your face
I just love the developing relationship between Spike and the Summers. I just hope you will not keep us waiting too long for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you Lynda, and no, the wait shouldn't be too long. Glad you enjoyed it =]
[Report This]Date: 10/14/2006 - 10:40 pm Title: Stuck in reverse
A nice morning after.. sleeping (waking up) in Spike's arms. Unconsciously she is trusting him or she wouldn't have been asleep.
Joyce didn't judge Buffy, she knows Spike is good for her. ~ OH my, they were running into Glory? And she knows Buffy is pregnant. Okay.. when Buffy is safe till the baby is born she is soon in danger again. Time did fly here.. looking forward what will happen with Glory.
Author's Response: Thank you Ck =)
[Report This]Date: 10/14/2006 - 03:19 am Title: Stuck in reverse
Another lovely chapter. Looking forward to more of this story.
Author's Response: Thank you so much Jessica =)
[Report This]Date: 10/13/2006 - 02:00 pm Title: Stuck in reverse
I love this new chapter. Spike living with the Summers. Buffy telling him to stay forever. I just love it.
Author's Response: Thank you so much Lynda =) That means so much to me xx
[Report This]Date: 10/13/2006 - 01:35 pm Title: Stuck in reverse
That was so beatitful. i loved it especially the ending. your doing a great job and i can't wait for more to come. udate again soon.
Author's Response: Thank you so much jenn sweetie =)
[Report This]Date: 10/13/2006 - 12:55 pm Title: Stuck in reverse
Can't wait for the baby to be born, update soon please.
Author's Response: Lol, I will, I promise!! =)
[Report This]Date: 10/13/2006 - 12:42 pm Title: When you feel so tired but you can’t sleep
awww, sweet
Author's Response: Thank you so much eve!!
[Report This]Date: 10/13/2006 - 12:34 pm Title: Stuck in reverse
loved it
Author's Response: Yay! Thank you!!
[Report This]Date: 10/13/2006 - 12:33 pm Title: When you get what you want but not what you need
I hope everything is alright with the baby, even it could be riley, i don't think there is some magical cause that it could be spike's, sigh, great chapter
Author's Response: Bless you, thank you eve =)
[Report This]Date: 10/13/2006 - 12:17 pm Title: When you try your best but you don't succeed
Can someone please beat up riley a bit, ok a lot? great chapter
Author's Response: Lol! Thanks eve! xx
[Report This]Date: 10/13/2006 - 12:06 pm Title: Fix You
Very sweet chapter. I like it.
Author's Response: Thank you eve!
[Report This]Date: 10/13/2006 - 07:11 am Title: Fix You
Loving the story! It's been a while since i've read fan-fic, but this is the perfect stuff to get me back into it and addicted good and proper!
Can I offer a bit of grammatical advice, though? (And I hope this doesn't come across as mean or snooty). The semi-colon ( ; ) is something you use to separate two sentences that could otherwise be split by a full stop. So basically both parts of the text on either side should read as complete sentences.... So, for example:
"She spins and kicks him in the head; causing him to stagger backward into a headstone" - the semi-colon here should probably be a comma, whereas if you had "She spins and kicks him in the head; the vampire staggers backward into a headstone", the semi-colon would be better placed. In the original, the two parts of the sentence wouldn't make sense sense on their own if the semi-colon was a full stop... if that makes sense? Sorry, that's totally nitpicky! But I remember learning little tidbits like this really helped me in my writing, so....
Anyway, can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: No, not nit-picky at all. I've always been known to go a little overboard with my semi-colons, my English teacher underlines them whenever I write essays, so actually, thank you for explaining clearly how they're really used [in a non-patronizing way too] =] Also, thank you so much for letting me know how much you're enjoying the story- it means a lot to me =) xx
[Report This]Date: 10/13/2006 - 07:02 am Title: Stuck in reverse
What a guy-- he can take the abuse, and still be sweet! That is a feat! Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: He's pretty awesome isn't he =) Next update soon! And thank you for reading xx
[Report This]Date: 10/13/2006 - 06:54 am Title: Stuck in reverse
The last moments of this chapter were gorgeous. As much as I hate to admit it, when I'm pregnant I'm just like Buffy. If I could smash a few heads, all the better. Looking forward to what happens next.
Author's Response: Lol, well at least I didn't go too overboard with the characterisation. Thank you so much for reviewing =)
[Report This]Date: 10/13/2006 - 06:39 am Title: Stuck in reverse
that was one fast forward chapter........ loved it. cant wait for more!!!
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it =]
[Report This]Date: 10/10/2006 - 06:55 pm Title: When you feel so tired but you can’t sleep
So sweet!
Author's Response: Thank you hun xx
[Report This]Date: 10/10/2006 - 03:27 pm Title: When you feel so tired but you can’t sleep
thank goodness she has spike, wonder how she'll cope if any thing were to happen to him.... love the update and waiting for more!
Author's Response: Thank you! More will be up soon, I promise!
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