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Reviewer: Xela Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/13/2006 - 09:42 pm Title: Part Nine

ha, I normally don't comment mid-reading, but I had to take a moment and tell you that the 'It's mad at the room, Mom. It wants the room to suffer." line is absolutely BRILLAINT. I laughed. A lot. thanks.

Reviewer: Esther Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/13/2006 - 08:53 am Title: Part Twelve

Hell yeah, that's how S3 should've gone! Damn, if Spike were there to help Buffy during that time, I'm sure she would've never let the Scoobies take over her life so easily and dictate it to their liking---and she wouldn't have been so adamant about Spike being 'an evil thing,' either. WOW!! I've got about a billion emotions running through me, and the loudest is happiness that Spike told them off. Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/12/2006 - 11:27 pm Title: Part Twelve

Loved how Spike was all protective! Great chapter!

Reviewer: tis-kit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/12/2006 - 11:21 pm Title: Part Twelve

Oh, this is perfect and in fact, cathartic. This reflects my sentiments on the events in question wonderfully well. I remember being absolutely fuming at the time and it's so liberating to read such a well-written piece that gives voice to issues that were never aired.

Again, I can't help but comment on your turn of phrase: "a story that Buffy wanted to read until her eyes closed for good"; only a snippet, but truly beautiful.

I hope you don't mind that I have friended you? I never want to miss another update.

Reviewer: Lou Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/12/2006 - 08:59 pm Title: Part Twelve

Perfect! I've always wished Buffy would have stood up to the treatment her pals dished out. That was spot on!

Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/12/2006 - 05:44 pm Title: Part Twelve

Oh I love it, I started reading this the first time you had it up and it just keeps getting better and better.

Reviewer: jane Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/12/2006 - 05:22 pm Title: Part One

Great start looking forward to more.

Reviewer: Cobweb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/12/2006 - 02:26 pm Title: Part Twelve

I gotta say it, Good on you Spike!! great update :)

Reviewer: Shanna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/12/2006 - 01:33 pm Title: Part Twelve

So happy to see another chapter upin this story. Great story and written very very well. Looking forward to more chapter and soon...please?

Reviewer: Emilee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/12/2006 - 12:21 pm Title: Part Twelve

It's nice to have Spike there for her this time around because frankly I thought how her friends all treated her on the show was ridiculous and cruel. Excellent update, can't wait for more.

Reviewer: sue Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/12/2006 - 11:35 am Title: Part Twelve

It was SO bloody irritating at the time of Season 3 and this welcome home party, because Buffy sure did get the unfair end of the wedge. This chapter of yours, however, goes a long way to righting that wrong: just to hear Spike's on the mark indignation at her dreadful friends and Mum's reaction to Buffy's reappearance in THEIR lives - well, his last, very articulate, if not explanatory remark to all and sundry, is just perfect. Perfect:
"Just bloody fuck off, the lot of you."

Because what can you say to such selfish, blinkered people? They were acting as if Buffy had spoiled the party of their newfound, adventurous lives long before she now spoiled this particular party that really, she should be grateful for -

He helped her as Anne. He is saving her as Buffy.

An uplifting chapter; please update soon. Thanks.

Reviewer: hotlipedjen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/12/2006 - 08:43 am Title: Part Twelve

Oh! I sure home Buffy gets to tell them off (at least a little) sometime soon. They SO deserve it! Great update.

Reviewer: VICTORIA Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/12/2006 - 06:50 am Title: Part Twelve

I've really been enjoying this story. This was a particularly good chapter. I always hated this episode on the show. I like your version so much better.. At least she isn't alone this time and its great to see Spike sticking up for her this way. Great job. Can't wait for the next update!

Reviewer: shelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/12/2006 - 06:42 am Title: Part Twelve

i like spike's approach! I always felt sorry for Buffy when i watched that!

Reviewer: daydreamer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/12/2006 - 05:49 am Title: Part Twelve

I just raed all twelve chapters at once and really like this story. I like how you are developing the relationship w/out it being based on the physical. Well done :) Update again soon...

Reviewer: Buffyratt Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/12/2006 - 05:14 am Title: Part Twelve

I really keep liking this story, so here is to another wonderful chapter!! Update soon tho'.

Reviewer: Christine Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/12/2006 - 05:09 am Title: Part Twelve

Great chapter, I love where you're taking this. Hope you update soon.

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/12/2006 - 04:13 am Title: Part Twelve

good update

Reviewer: kw Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/12/2006 - 03:14 am Title: Part Twelve

Great tie in to friends confrontation

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/12/2006 - 02:55 am Title: Part Twelve

Thank you, Spike!!!! Hilarious how he's "helping her pack" by stealing her underwear.

And of course, downstairs has now gone wacky and there's a Slayer situation to handle.

More vengeance! More! :D

Reviewer: Priscilla Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/12/2006 - 02:32 am Title: Part Twelve

Really though, this chapter was just so great. I loved it. Ha there was a point where I didn't even know if Buffy actually did call Spike or if she only managed to dial the numbers. Through both me and her for a loop there. Oh this was so good. And I would really just loooove to see when Spike sees Xander. And when he tears into Joyce. When she said that in the episode it killed me, and when I read it again, I just wanted to punch her. But thankfully, we have Spike to Buffy's rescue

Reviewer: sharon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/10/2006 - 09:46 am Title: Part Eleven

please update this story more often I really like it.I want to see where you go with the story

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/07/2006 - 08:24 pm Title: Part Eleven

I'll always read the updates if I have Internet access.. even if I'm terrible late reading like today.
To (on) the contrary of Buffy's friends that are rejecting Buffy (at last it feels for her this way) Spike is welcome her, giving her the feelings of home. That's more than her friends did. And Buffy likes it.
Love how Spike is there for her.

Reviewer: missus_grace Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/06/2006 - 07:08 am Title: Part Eleven

So glad to see more of this story. I just love it, and the deep emotions of Buffy's POV.

Although I think her friends have a right to be mad about her flight, it's interesting to see how she's reacting to everything.

And I love supportive Spike. He's being very sweet.

Reviewer: tis-kit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/05/2006 - 08:38 pm Title: Part Eleven

I'm enchanted; you have a marvellous way with words, so fluid and haunting.

The kiss was gorgeous and the emotions expressed are heart-wrenching.

At the risk of reiterating my previous review, this has really struck a chord deep within me and I can't wait to see how you develop matters.

Great update, great story!


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