Date: 09/17/2006 - 10:32 am Title: Chapter Two: Let's Try Again
Awwh, this is going in a nice direction :]
Date: 08/23/2006 - 10:22 pm Title: Chapter Two: Let's Try Again
Now isn't this a totally unique and refrehing Buffy character that you came up with. You definitely have one active and awesome imagination. So glad that you are sharing the fruits of it with us.
Date: 08/22/2006 - 04:40 pm Title: Chapter Two: Let's Try Again
Spike has every right to feel embarrassed but Buffy did take it well :) And now he has to make it up to her again right? So Buffy will have an advantage. ~ And Spike has a lot of questions (he doesn't want to ask right now). But I think we'll get to now it sooner or later... ~ And Angel is her brother... mmmh I wonder who you picked for Buffy's dead boyfriend. Lol.. Spike is human, huh? Or like Buffy said: He is a man (about how is apartment looked like). ~ Loved the new chapter; thanks for the update :)
Date: 08/22/2006 - 08:21 am Title: Chapter Two: Let's Try Again
I really like this, its drawn me in, the expectation your setting is addictive
Date: 08/22/2006 - 05:08 am Title: Chapter Two: Let's Try Again
very cool twist with buffy being deaf. Can't wait to see who her boyfriend was or what happened.
Date: 08/22/2006 - 04:30 am Title: Chapter Two: Let's Try Again
Well, at least he feels like an ass when he acts like an ass. And he did a mighty fine job of eating humble pie! I like this characterization of Buffy-- seems like less baggage (but who knows). Her behavior and attitude will probably continue to take Spike off guard, and it's a refreshing change from the, "there's something wrong with Buffy" that is so (understandably) common in fanfic, since that is how she was portrayed on the show. I like that the person who would seem to have the most problems is the most easy going-- nice way to switch things up. I also like the way that she requests to be in Spike's home-- she must feel safe with him, and it will probably get Spike thinking of someone other than himself. A very good second chapter and set-up for the storyline. Looking foward to more!
Date: 08/22/2006 - 04:09 am Title: Chapter Two: Let's Try Again
I'm really liking this. Now she's at his place--guess I wasn't expecting that either. Hopefully he'll let his squad know. I think I'm going to like your characterization of Buffy. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 08/22/2006 - 03:59 am Title: Chapter Two: Let's Try Again
great update, i had figured the slain boyfriend was angel, guess not :) please hurry and update again soon, i can't figure out what will happen next which has gotten me hooked to this fic :)
Date: 08/22/2006 - 03:51 am Title: Chapter Two: Let's Try Again
I'm so glad Buffy accepted Spike's apology. I'm really liking this version of Buffy so far. Great chapter!
Date: 08/22/2006 - 03:47 am Title: Chapter Two: Let's Try Again
With it being Spike, I'm surprised he didn't just tell her he loved her the second she said she liked his DeSoto! LOL! I really love this tale so far. Buffy is being so sweet and strong, yet so vulnerable. More please.
Date: 08/22/2006 - 03:32 am Title: Chapter Two: Let's Try Again
oh you are so getting some nominations for this fiction!!!!!! lol. this is so good and it
s only the second chapter. loved it. gerat job. please PLEASE post soon!!!!!
Date: 08/22/2006 - 01:52 am Title: Chapter Two: Let's Try Again
Buffy likes Spike's car :-D (Sorry y whole flu thingy decided to return so I'm a little weirder than normal) but back to the actual review-y-ness: I like this a lot, lot, lot--already so tht means I'll only like it more later. Yep :)
Date: 08/22/2006 - 01:26 am Title: Chapter Two: Let's Try Again
This is just exciting me more and more.
Thank you Brat, I needed this chapter today as much as anyone I think.
spuf
Date: 08/22/2006 - 01:24 am Title: Chapter Two: Let's Try Again
Wow....life must be different for her. If Angel is her brother, who was her boyfriend and best friend? Is Spike allowed to be with her if it happens or will his job be in the way? I can't wait to read what you have next! Update soon please!
Date: 08/22/2006 - 01:19 am Title: Chapter Two: Let's Try Again
more soon please! this is sooo good. i love all your stories and youve done it again. another great one. i cant wait to see what happens next!
Date: 08/22/2006 - 01:18 am Title: Chapter Two: Let's Try Again
I think this is going to be a really great story, and can't wait to read more.
Date: 08/22/2006 - 01:15 am Title: Chapter Two: Let's Try Again
AWW! Cute! I really like it....especially because buffy is really sweet and understanding....Update soon!
Date: 08/22/2006 - 01:13 am Title: Chapter Two: Let's Try Again
Just came across your fic and can't wait for more! Love it!
Date: 08/22/2006 - 01:06 am Title: Chapter Two: Let's Try Again
Glad she changed her mind... Waiting to see where the story goes.
Date: 08/22/2006 - 01:00 am Title: Chapter Two: Let's Try Again
I am so excited about this fic. I can't wait to see what you have in store for us.
-Alyx
Date: 08/22/2006 - 12:46 am Title: Chapter Two: Let's Try Again
Wow. This is getting better and better...
Date: 08/22/2006 - 12:41 am Title: Chapter Two: Let's Try Again
Well, she warmed up to him quickly. I imagine she doesn't do that as easily anymore....
Date: 08/22/2006 - 12:34 am Title: Chapter Two: Let's Try Again
Please keep this story up. I really like it. I haven't seen too many stories that have one of them having a disablitiy. I love it. KUTGW