Date: 09/17/2006 - 10:53 am Title: Chapter Four: Here's my Baggage
Yes- she's exactly the kind of 'complication' that he DOES need, when will silly Spike learn?
Fab again!
Date: 08/24/2006 - 09:14 pm Title: Chapter Four: Here's my Baggage
Really entertaining story! I look forward to the updates. :)
Date: 08/24/2006 - 07:34 pm Title: Chapter Four: Here's my Baggage
Wow.. Buffy is strong. She must be I think. Buffy had her alarm system organized well. And she was quick in finding a way to defend herself. The hair-spray was a good idea. Lol Spike was rude because he is attracted to Buffy and is trying to defend himself before it is too late for him.. but maybe it is already lol :) Loved it.
Date: 08/24/2006 - 03:20 pm Title: Chapter Four: Here's my Baggage
Great chapter! Loved it!
Date: 08/24/2006 - 11:52 am Title: Chapter Four: Here's my Baggage
Now don't go making him act like an ass again, just because he was having lusty Buffy thoughts.... I really like how taken he is with her-- And you have portrayed her as incredibly strong. I wasn't even thinking about all of this rational, crime detective stuff (other than the fact that she should be a suspect), but it was nice that you got these questions out of the way. Since Spike is a cop, it's like you've satisfied his curious mind so they can take the next step in their relationship. I'm a little confused, too. She originally didn't want to leave her house. Then when she's with Spike, she asks to stay with him. Then she isn't sure she wants to stay at his house? Was it just a one-night kind of thing-- Just to stay at his house?
Another brilliant chapter. I am so grooving on this fic!!! And thank you bunches for consistently updating these fics. ;)
Author's Response: Hi! Thank you for the review. I always love reading what you have to say :)
I think with Buffy wanting to go home, at first she really did because she was trying to be all strong, then when she got to Spike's she felt safer and the idea of going home actually terrified her and she just wanted to take the night to process it all, however, she doesn't want to rely on anyone and doesn't want the event to drive her completely away, so she does want to go back. Am I making sense? LOL. I know what I was thinking in my head, sometimes it doesn't always come out right...Mainly, Buffy was just in shock.
Date: 08/24/2006 - 08:00 am Title: Chapter Four: Here's my Baggage
This is great - just loving it!
Date: 08/24/2006 - 06:40 am Title: Chapter Four: Here's my Baggage
cool chapter..........he really needs to sort out his relationship with anya but I understand that buffy is rather unavailable now.
Date: 08/24/2006 - 03:45 am Title: Chapter Four: Here's my Baggage
Interesting talk between Spike and Buffy, it was very informative. Loved the chapter!
Date: 08/24/2006 - 02:43 am Title: Chapter Four: Here's my Baggage
Wonderful update. Very emotional chap. Highly unique tale with Buffy being deaf. Look forward to more.
Date: 08/24/2006 - 02:06 am Title: Chapter Four: Here's my Baggage
Complications can be good. And giving comfort can be good too.
Date: 08/24/2006 - 01:30 am Title: Chapter Four: Here's my Baggage
Yeah, yeah, so he dosn't need another girl in his life...but see it's Buffy so that negates the other stuff...or so I say--even if I'm thinking that I just made no sense :S Anyway I still love this story so very, very much :-D Great update, hope you can update again soon
Date: 08/24/2006 - 01:06 am Title: Chapter Four: Here's my Baggage
loved it. great job. please post soon. this is a mystery. i really hope they catch whoever is doing this.
Date: 08/24/2006 - 12:59 am Title: Chapter Four: Here's my Baggage
That was kinda harsh of him! Update soon please!
Date: 08/24/2006 - 12:59 am Title: Chapter Four: Here's my Baggage
THANKS FOR SUCH A RAPID update. I check for updates on my favorite stories at least once a day ... THANKS ... you never disappoint!!!! (Drives me nuts when someone updates once every few weeks or less or even abandons a story) Any how ...
This story is getting better and better by the sentence. Love how the tension as well as the understanding of each other is building.
Date: 08/24/2006 - 12:29 am Title: Chapter Four: Here's my Baggage
And another speedy update. I feel so spoiled! Great chapter by the way. :) We get more on Buffy's situation and Spike is already falling for her. I love it. Great chapter.
-Alyx