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Reviewer: Mari Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/23/2006 - 02:04 am Title: Chapter Thirteen: Rain on My Parade

Uh-oh, not sure if that's good or bad. The kiss was amazing though, hope they can clear the air soon about that. ;)

Reviewer: willowmouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/03/2006 - 04:25 am Title: Chapter Thirteen: Rain on My Parade

mmmm, and it just gets more interesting .....

Reviewer: Amanda Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/03/2006 - 03:29 am Title: Chapter Thirteen: Rain on My Parade

Oh crap! What a way to end the chapter. Can't wait to see what is going to happen next.

Reviewer: spufette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/03/2006 - 12:14 am Title: Chapter Thirteen: Rain on My Parade

My what a twist.

You know, I almost think....well no, I won't say.

Anyway, great chapter and I love all of your updates!

spuf

Author's Response: Oh come on...now you've got me in suspense! LOL

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/02/2006 - 10:26 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen: Rain on My Parade

Spike's thoughts about himself and women were really interesting, his musings make me very curious to learn more about his past, especially about his relationship with his mother. Loved the unexpected twist at the end of the chapter. Great update!

Reviewer: Dirktavian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/02/2006 - 08:51 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen: Rain on My Parade

You know how to keep me on pins & needles!! Will they, won't they-- who will be brave enough to be vulnerable with their feelings? I like how that tension remains ratcheted up a few notches and you try to distract your rabid readers with actual plot. Silly girl-- I won't soon forget, and I can be *sort of* patient. ;) Great update.

Reviewer: mikim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/02/2006 - 08:47 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen: Rain on My Parade

Hello! Good god, woman, you write a lot! (not that I'm complaining the opposite, actually it's just I wasn't able to check the TSR for a little over a week and bam! all those chapters! I must say I'm amazed!) Anyway, I totally am in love with this story! Even though, I just wanna reach in the story and shake the hell out of Spike!!!!! lol! OOoh and the mystery with the murders and stuff!!! OOOOh!!! Anyway, you are one of my favorite authors and I just know when I wanna read a good story I just have to pick one of yours!
xxx
mikim

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/02/2006 - 08:28 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen: Rain on My Parade

Things are starting to get more complicated. Great chapter!

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/02/2006 - 06:09 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen: Rain on My Parade

Oh wow...they must be if they're dead already. Seems like a cover up, tying up all loose ends! Update soon please!

Reviewer: BreannaStorm Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/02/2006 - 06:00 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen: Rain on My Parade

ooooh, and the plot thickens :D

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/02/2006 - 05:49 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen: Rain on My Parade

and so the plot thiickens!!!!!!!!!! lol. post soon. i think riley did it. lol. okay, that was wrong of me but i always suspect the worst of him. anyway, post soon.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/02/2006 - 05:30 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen: Rain on My Parade

Mmm nice kiss, very nice :) But then Anya joined them, meaning Buffy remembered, not Spike. Buffy is clever indeed; she notices the small things and Spike got caught. And why is Spike sorry now? Ah, he is so torn about it. (Loved Spike's thinking.) Uh-huh.. the robbers are dead now? So there is behind them... it's getting more dangerous. ~ Looking forward to the next part :)

Reviewer: Kimmie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/02/2006 - 04:30 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen: Rain on My Parade

My wish was granted .... the chapter began with kissage ... (next time there is kissage, could you use about 2 long detailed chapters for it?? LOL) (and no, I am not in high school ... just love well written romance)
Interesting development ... you are the master of suspense here. I cannot even begin to guess where this is going. Thank god you update frequently. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Suzee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/02/2006 - 03:57 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen: Rain on My Parade

You know, Spike's pretty good with this whole denial thing...not saying he doesn't have his reasons but....And hes still staying there, right? Because those two are good at avoiding each other (in general not necessarily this fic--but I guess they could be here too)...and I just woke up (I sleep way toodang late) so I'll shut up until I make sense again :) Thanks for the update

Reviewer: kirra Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/02/2006 - 03:23 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen: Rain on My Parade

I know he has issues to work on, but poor girl, he sure as hell has to make her feel confused, lol.
Unexpected twist with burglars..
Want more.

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/02/2006 - 02:53 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen: Rain on My Parade

Yummy kissage again! Too bad Anya was mentioned. Too bad Spike can't cast aside all his doubts. Wonderful chap. Wonderful tale. More please.

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/02/2006 - 02:51 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen: Rain on My Parade

Love the development of the relationship between Spike and Buffy. So if the robbers were found dead.. will the police department pull Spike's assignment?

Reviewer: rosie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/02/2006 - 02:50 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen: Rain on My Parade

awesome chapter!!!! cant wait to see what happens next!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/02/2006 - 02:46 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen: Rain on My Parade

Dun dun dunh....the plot thickens.

Poor inexperienced Buffy. Poor bruised and battered Spike.

Reviewer: Jenn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/02/2006 - 02:39 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen: Rain on My Parade

Well you certainly are the master of the cliffhanger! You are KILLING ME. I love this story and want longer longer longer chapters and more spuffy!! ;-) You are doing a fabulous job writing this story, I'm really enjoying it. I love Buffy being dear, adds a great element to the story.

Jenn

Reviewer: gotkona Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/02/2006 - 02:31 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen: Rain on My Parade

getting very interesting now. can't wait for more.

Reviewer: ChrissieLinnit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/02/2006 - 02:21 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen: Rain on My Parade

Spike was ashamed of himself. He was a right git, a bastard really.

Says it all baby, says it all.

*God, these past couple of episodes have made me feel like a man-hating feminist rather than a 40something, twice married mother of four - gulps*

Wonder who offed the burglars? Hmmm.

Reviewer: cee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/02/2006 - 02:13 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen: Rain on My Parade

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suspense!!

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