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Reviewer: Mari Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/23/2006 - 02:16 am Title: Chapter Sixteen: Let's Work Together

Wonderful chapter! I'm very curious and suspicious about Riley now, I feel he might be behind all this somehow. Will keep on reading tomorrow, I'm too tired to write coherent reviews now. ;)

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/05/2006 - 07:58 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen: Let's Work Together

Well that was a bit tactless (does harsh fit) of Riley. *smile* It seems as if Buffy is more used to run then Spike. He felt a bit defeated, huh? So he has to run more :) Loved chivalrous Spike, first tending to her wound and then cooking. :-D

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/05/2006 - 07:35 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen: Let's Work Together

I'm getting more and more suspicious about Riley! It seems like he's part of the shooting and robbery! I hope Spike watches out for Riley even more now! Update soon please!

Reviewer: gotkona Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/05/2006 - 12:27 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen: Let's Work Together

Nice bonding moments. I like out of shape Spike

Reviewer: willowmouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/05/2006 - 08:26 am Title: Chapter Sixteen: Let's Work Together

That was so sweet! I really like the communication that they've got going on

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/05/2006 - 07:43 am Title: Chapter Sixteen: Let's Work Together

Wonderful chapter! I enjoyed the Spuffy interaction, it's so great to see Spike and Buffy so comfortable around each other. Loved the sweet moment when Spike kissed Buffy's finger to make it all better. Can't wait to find out how the dinner goes. :D

Reviewer: Dirktavian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/05/2006 - 05:28 am Title: Chapter Sixteen: Let's Work Together

Nice way to continue to bring along the tension with the nervous laughter and the band-aid incident. I also like how you have set things up for the next chapter to seem very romantic. Maybe Buffy can share some of her insecurities in "that area", and then Spike can go on & one about how wonderful she is-- Maybe then she'll catch a clue as to why he's been sprinting out of the room so fast when she's turning him on. Or maybe, wine and Buffy are still un-mixy things, and Spike will think she's even more adorable when she's throwing herself at him. Hmmm....the possibilities!

Reviewer: Jessica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/05/2006 - 04:32 am Title: Chapter Sixteen: Let's Work Together

Ok was it just me or does that wine sound foreboding? lol Loved the chapters. More please.

Reviewer: gypsy_jin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/05/2006 - 04:09 am Title: Chapter Sixteen: Let's Work Together

I love spaghetti. :) Good chapter. ;)

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/05/2006 - 03:41 am Title: Chapter Sixteen: Let's Work Together

Jeepers! I'm in update heaven on this tale. I've must be falling behind (or you are a posting-monster!) Either way, I'm a happy reader with so much to read! Loved these couple of chaps! I really like how they are connecting and the cooking dinner together was just sweet. Now there's gonna be wine? That sounds promising! More please (yet I'm greedy - it's your fault) Love It!

Reviewer: rosie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/05/2006 - 03:09 am Title: Chapter Sixteen: Let's Work Together

cant wait to see what happens next!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/05/2006 - 02:33 am Title: Chapter Sixteen: Let's Work Together

*smile*

Reviewer: vs in nj Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/05/2006 - 01:27 am Title: Chapter Sixteen: Let's Work Together

Awww...They are just too cute together. She really is melting is heart!

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/05/2006 - 01:27 am Title: Chapter Sixteen: Let's Work Together

loved it lots. spke is really warming up to buffy. i think buffy has already warmed up to spike. great job. loved it lots. please PLEASE post soon.

Reviewer: Amanda Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/05/2006 - 01:21 am Title: Chapter Sixteen: Let's Work Together

Ooo cooking together, now that can be dangerous and not in the ouch I cut my finger or oops I burned it kind of way, more in the oooo, the knobs on the drawers are digging into my back can we switch positions please? Lol.

Reviewer: Kimmie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/05/2006 - 01:04 am Title: Chapter Sixteen: Let's Work Together

You are doing such a great job of building a wonderful foundation of a friendship. They are developing a mutual caring for each other, a protectiveness that works both ways, trust and just a nice comfort taken in the participation of mundane every day happenings in their lives.

It's so nice that they sincerely enjoy each other's company. (makes it even better when they jump each others bones, hee hee)

Reviewer: Suzee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/05/2006 - 12:53 am Title: Chapter Sixteen: Let's Work Together

You know, you ending it with the wine makes me wonder exactly how and if that's going to play into the next chapter--but I'm odd today so it's possible you should just pretendI'm not here ;-) Thanks for yet another wonderful update..and whatever magic you do on the story so that I actually get the update emails for this fic :-D

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/05/2006 - 12:48 am Title: Chapter Sixteen: Let's Work Together

Riley can be such an idiot! Glad Buffy and Spike are getting more comfortable around each other. Great chapter!

Reviewer: TammyAsh666 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/05/2006 - 12:40 am Title: Chapter Sixteen: Let's Work Together

Oooh, time to get good and drunk...lol! Kidding, unless that's where you plan on going. I like the bonding between the two and how Spike always wants to protect her. I'll ignore Riley's stupidity this once, I'm sure he didn't mean it. We all sometimes speak before thinking. Great chapter=)

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