Date: 10/20/2006 - 03:29 pm Title: Chapter Seven
Well it isn't really funny and yet it is, Spike being fearful because he was caught watching Telly :)
(Loved the talking.) And seeing Spike being eager to get a shower.. moving so fast? Buffy only had to remind him that it was his choice. Maybe he is beginning to trust her now. Yup.. he was musing so. Cute: "being the pet of this golden warrior with her endearing and comforting soft side, he was already overcome with the urge to kill things and lay them at her feet" Like a very big cat :-D
Ah well, things have gotten backwards because of what happened with Buffy's original Spike in the bathroom. Seems Buffy is laying the whole blame on Spike, what Buffy did to him before doesn't count. Spike is ready to be punished... he didn't even smoke his cigarettes...
I wonder where Buffy went and if she'll be calmer later.
Date: 10/19/2006 - 03:18 pm Title: Chapter Seven
I am enjoying the depth of emotion and attention to detail in this story. The exploration of the psychological damage Spike's captivity has wrought is awful and fascinating. You finally had Spike relaxing into the situation, and then the rug was well and firmly pulled out from under him. I certainly hope that was The First, I can't imagine Buffy being so intentionally cruel...
Date: 10/19/2006 - 01:42 pm Title: Chapter Seven
This sounds so very much like the First. Please update soon.
Date: 10/19/2006 - 01:14 pm Title: Chapter Seven
Poor Spike... as if his mind wasn't in enough chaos already, now the First shows up to do its number on him.
What a great story you're writing!
Date: 10/19/2006 - 04:08 am Title: Chapter Seven
And the 1st strikes again! Love your story please write more soon!
Date: 10/19/2006 - 03:18 am Title: Chapter Seven
I'm hoping The First, because otherwise, major plot jumping and baaaad characterization.
Date: 10/18/2006 - 11:12 pm Title: Chapter Seven
Dang that First Evil. Messing up our Spike (or is it our Spike?). I love this. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Date: 10/18/2006 - 10:08 pm Title: Chapter Seven
I must have skipped over your story before. I am really liking it. Although I don't think I was ready for this bathroom scene for some reason, even though it fits well for the feelings she must have for him. Really looking forward to more.
Date: 10/18/2006 - 06:53 pm Title: Chapter Seven
This is good but now i am getting confused. Are there two Buffy's-bad buff good buff and why has Spike only got 1 inch of dark hair growth, because after three years it would be more unless his captors were kind enough to bleach it for him. I am sure this story isn't as staright forward as first though. Good
Date: 10/18/2006 - 05:49 pm Title: Chapter Seven
Aah, the first makes it´s entry. That´s bad. Just the history between those two would´ve been enough, and now this... Poor Spike.....
Date: 10/18/2006 - 05:46 pm Title: Chapter Seven
I actively dislike Buffy in this and really hope that she gets a heart soon. I've always disliked the version of Buffy that feels justified in treating a thinking entitiy as a thing. You are doing a great job with this story, and I think that your characterizations on very good.
Date: 10/18/2006 - 03:56 pm Title: Chapter Seven
My guess is The First..because although Buffy is hot and cold, she isn't quite that moody. Update soon!