Reviews For My Immortal
Reviewer: Escaflowne,Dante Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/25/2006 - 07:37 am Title: Six
Date: 09/25/2006 - 07:37 am Title: Six
I think that the killings are too sudden and without backstory its hard to see where this really fits. On the plus side I like the touch of sible rivalry and the court leads me to believe that things can get worse for these characters.
Reviewer: *bite me* Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2006 - 03:15 pm Title: Six
Date: 09/14/2006 - 03:15 pm Title: Six
I do like the tweaking. I think you did a good job, with creating this story line and following characters backgrounds like Darla's. Also, the setting seems sp real even though you speak little of it. But, other then that the story seems to come together wee, it is a more adult-like reading not so much with the content but with the style and way it was written.
Please update soon, it's wonderful
Thanx