Date: 09/20/2006 - 12:41 pm Title: chapter one
This is interesting. I really like it so far. Unfortunately I have to be off to work now so I cannot read the next four chapters. I really like your writing. You have a wonderful way of describing what is happening. Usually it is diffuclt for me to submerse myself in a scene, but you've made it effortless for me. I can't wait until 6:30 rolls round so I can read the other chapters.
Date: 09/13/2006 - 09:45 am Title: chapter one
Very nice interactions with character, easy to read, inspirational 10/10 , one of my favs, you go girlfriend :-)
Date: 09/13/2006 - 07:33 am Title: chapter one
Your narrative is absolutely great, from Spike's POV - you've caught his wit, his insight, his confusion and his raison d'etre. Buffy. And that bit at the last - about Ben's perfume: inspired!
Date: 09/13/2006 - 01:25 am Title: chapter one
Great first chapter! The internal dialogue and musings of Spike in one of my favorite episodes is fun to read. it's what I imagine him to have been thinking :)