Reviews For Taking the Girl
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Reviewer: conor Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2006 - 05:39 am Title: chapter three

hello random stranger!
you=skill.
that spike likes the ramones, the sex pistols and the buzzcocks made me like him alot more.

excellent.

Reviewer: Brat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/13/2006 - 06:50 pm Title: chapter three

Oh boy, this is heating up! I'm curious to see what you do with the rest of the "episode" :)

Reviewer: katakata Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/13/2006 - 08:16 am Title: chapter three

Love the pen name (OOMM is one of my favourite episodes and Spike's "Silly bint" comment a fav moment from it) and your fic is really interesting thus far. You have a writing style that is enjoyable to read, and goodness knows writing an established character's thoughts in an authentic-sounding voice can be hard to do. I think you've captured Spike and his inner-William really well however so kudos for that! Looking forward to where you might take this from here on out.

Reviewer: sue Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/13/2006 - 07:47 am Title: chapter three

..... something purely demon sliding across her features ......"
And hey presto, there's Buffy. Split personality - or really dual personality, for the Slayer side stays well-hidden from her friends, family and day living. But by night ...... it was the girl who first reacted to Spike's overtures, but then the Slayer came to the fore...... game over. Ironically, though, it is this, almost insurmountable mountain of anti-Spike that spurs him on, because he recognises the darkness in her and although he doesn't want to exploit it, along with her beauty and wit, it calls to him, she's become deep-seated in his psyche. He just knows they would be good together. Fire and Ice. Heat and Desire. Can you already here the sizzle?

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