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Reviewer: willowmouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/09/2006 - 09:05 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen: Reveille

THis was much better than the actual episode! Really enjoying this fic, great plot and very well writen :)

Author's Response: Thank you, hope you'll keep reading.

Reviewer: ella Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/09/2006 - 08:47 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen: Reveille

Absolutely enjoyed the way you handled the Riley situation. It was a fresh approach and that's always a plus in a fic. The way Spuffy relationship is progressing is just so cute! More, more, more!

Author's Response: Thanks. I didn't want to do the bashing. And I think Spike comes off even better when compared to Riley as a decent but flawed guy instead of some sort of crazy evil hooligan. Hopefully I'll have the next chapter ready by the weekend.

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/09/2006 - 08:20 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen: Reveille

I liked it, I'm glad that Spike didnt have the eggs.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. Yeah, a very different story in this version :)

Reviewer: missus_grace Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/07/2006 - 04:38 am Title: Chapter Thirteen: Older and Closer

It was nice to see them best Hallie, especially with how rude she was being.

Buffy's dream sounds very intriguing.

Author's Response: Thanks; glad I intriguied you. Hope you'll keep reading.

Reviewer: golddrake Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/07/2006 - 01:05 am Title: Chapter Thirteen: Older and Closer

great chapter

Author's Response: Thank you

Reviewer: jane Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/06/2006 - 05:34 am Title: Chapter Thirteen: Older and Closer

Super update..

Author's Response: Thanks!

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Date: 10/04/2006 - 05:00 pm Title: Chapter Twelve: Dead Things

Lovely chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: willowmouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/04/2006 - 08:49 am Title: Chapter Twelve: Dead Things

Loved this update - this is a great fic, I love the plot :)

Author's Response: Thanks! Hope to have the next one ready soon.

Reviewer: missus_grace Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/04/2006 - 05:56 am Title: Chapter Twelve: Dead Things

I always wanted to see a Buffy apology for the events in Dead Things. This was pretty close. And she finally admits his feelings for her are real.



Author's Response: Yeah, they just sorta glosses over the aftermath in canon, but then again at this point, the relationship little resembles canon (I hope).

Reviewer: Time of Change Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/04/2006 - 12:06 am Title: Chapter Twelve: Dead Things

I'm really enjoying this story.

Author's Response: I'm so glad! I hope you'll keep reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: golddrake Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/03/2006 - 11:29 pm Title: Chapter Twelve: Dead Things

great chapter

Author's Response: Thanks! Hope to have the next up soon.

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/01/2006 - 12:27 am Title: Chapter Eleven: The Espresso Pump

Love it cant wait to see theprophecy Dawn was talking about.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! One of the prophecies will get some direct address next chapter.

Reviewer: Raspy_Luv Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2006 - 03:30 pm Title: Chapter Five: All the Way

I love this.

Author's Response: Thanks! Hope you'll continue to enjoy it.

Reviewer: kcarolj65 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2006 - 03:14 pm Title: Chapter Eleven: The Espresso Pump

This is really wonderful. You've captured each character beautifully and have offered a really nice, believable alternative to the sturm-und-drang of canon Season 6. Looking forward to the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks so much. I've really been having a great time writing this. I hope to have the next chapter ready soon.

Reviewer: chanel #5 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2006 - 03:38 am Title: Chapter Eleven: The Espresso Pump

Nice chapter. Xander seems a bit different in this story, nicer though. It's good.

Author's Response: Thanks again. Yes, I am fonder of Xander than some in the community :)

Reviewer: golddrake Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2006 - 03:26 am Title: Chapter Eleven: The Espresso Pump

great chapter

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: chanel #5 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/29/2006 - 04:47 pm Title: Chapter Ten: Gone

Great story. It makes you appreciate our mothers. I thought for a min that this was a response to challenge 203. they are very similar. Can't wait to see this through. :)

Author's Response: Thanks! I hope you'll continue to like it as it moves along.

Reviewer: Elaine Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/27/2006 - 07:10 pm Title: Chapter One: Bargaining

Great Chapter, I love that she wants to invite him for Christmas. I like your take on Joyce, I find some stories have her too pro Spike so it's just not believable, but you've got a good balance between concern for her daughter's happiness, concern for Spike who she's really only somewhat friendly with in the show, and disappointment that her daughter would have sex without love. I also like that it forced Buffy to defend her choices to her mom. The Slayer being barren was an interesting concept that would have made sense for cannon especially as Joss repeatedly said Buffy would never get pregnant, but I'm guessing this means that Vampires aren't exactly impotent. Looking forward to the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I think one of the most important things about Joyce (as Buffy expressed for me here) is how much Joyce wants Buffy to have a normal life. That has both good and bad consequences in that the normai-ness helps ground Buffy, but it also means there are all these expectations she can't meet (like, at least in my Verse, providing grandkids). Anyway, my Joyce gets along with Spike and likes that Buffy has someone strong fighting alongside her, but she isn't going to think he's ideal boyfriend material. Re: vampires and infertility. Well, Angel did manage to get himself a son!

Reviewer: time of change Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/27/2006 - 07:02 pm Title: Chapter Ten: Gone

Another chapter to love! I think this is the best one yet.

Author's Response: Thanks! I had a great time writing this one. Hope you'll like the next one too.

Reviewer: Time of Change Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/25/2006 - 11:49 pm Title: Chapter Nine: Wrecked

Drive-by feedback: wonderful chapter!

Author's Response: Oh, all feedback is happily accepted :) Thanks!

Reviewer: willowmouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/24/2006 - 07:30 am Title: Chapter Nine: Wrecked

I only started reading this at chapter 9, so very glad that I did! Great plot and very well writen, really enjoying the read, looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: So glad you tuned in! I hope you'll continue to enjoy it.

Reviewer: Emma Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/20/2006 - 08:06 pm Title: Chapter Eight: Smash and Grab

Ooh, good chapter! I really liked how you wrote that scene between them, more open, still sudden, but more clear what was going on than the show (I don't mean it wasn't obvious on the show what was going on, cuz it was, but what I mean is that the characters both understood and accepted what was happening in your story, which is a GOOD thing!) I can't wait for the next updates, I hope they come soon!

Author's Response: Glad you liked it! The next chapter is with the beta and I hope you'll think it's good too.

Reviewer: blondiebear Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/20/2006 - 06:28 pm Title: Chapter Eight: Smash and Grab

well.....yeah....that was.....PLEASE LET THIS BE BETTER THAN HOW SEASON SIX WENT CUZ AS MUCH AS I LOVED (AND STILL LOVE) WATCHING THE SHOW IT WAS VERY DARK AND BUFFY WAS A REAL BITCH. LOVE HER BUT SHE WAS. HOPEFULLY THIS STORY IS GOING TO TAKE A DIFFERENT DIRECTION THAN THE SHOW DID. AND ALREADY IT SEEMS LIKE THINGS AREN'T GOING TO BE AS DARK IN THE STORY AS IT WAS ON THE SHOW!!! GREAT JOB. LOVED IT SOOOOO MUCH.

Author's Response: Well, it will certainly be different than the show's season six. Thanks for the enthusiastic review. I hope you'll continue to like where I take things!

Reviewer: Time of Change Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/20/2006 - 02:49 pm Title: Chapter Eight: Smash and Grab

Ahh. Sex and angst. It's an unbeatable combination. I really like the way you are writing Xander, Willow, Dawn and Anya in this story.

Author's Response: Thanks, glad you're enjoying it. I've really enjoyed writing the secondary characters.

Reviewer: Elaine Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/18/2006 - 10:59 pm Title: Tabula Rasa

Great story so far, I'm enjoying all of the little differences between your story and the show. The characters are very will written and I enjoy your writing style. I have no idea why you don't have more reviews.

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm glad you're enjoying it. And by all means, tell your buds and maybe I'll get more reviews ;)

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