Date: 01/07/2007 - 06:30 pm Title: Chapter 25
I understood it fine. I rather liked the way it was written.
Date: 12/10/2006 - 07:44 am Title: Chapter 25
part of reading is having to follow the work - your readers have to put in their efforts as well.
Change your work because you want to make it better, not just to make it easier to read.
Date: 12/09/2006 - 09:39 pm Title: Chapter 25
Now I understand the why you wrote "confusing part", was it too...I explain:
It's starts with "normal Summers' home", Tara dead, Willow gone dark. And Buffy searching for Spike all the time. At last she found his duster, but nothing more. And she is missing him so much (Buffy's POV, I don't think Spike is dreaming it.) ~ And then we see soulful Spike going back to his crypt. That did sound real to me. ~ And then Buffy was outside Spike's crypt, didn't go in first but heard Spike (at last I guess) singing. And Buffy isn't pleased about it because she was worried sick.
Got it :-D I only had to read it slow... it was Willow at the end! I thought first it was Buffy but you never said it was her, that's right. *not confused any longer*
Author's Response: ROFL :D
Date: 12/08/2006 - 04:50 am Title: Chapter 25
terrific story -
Date: 12/08/2006 - 02:36 am Title: Chapter 25
OH! I got it!!! Sorry it took a while to sink in. I was so confused! I thought it was Buffy and then I started rambling in french. Confusion cleared, mist and fog gone. Gotcha ;)
Author's Response: You are too funny.
Date: 12/08/2006 - 02:32 am Title: Chapter 25
Que?? I got lost between the last two paragraphs. Right here>>“You son of a bitch…”
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Her hand was shaking as she dragged the pen across the paper.
Otherwise, great update as usual.
Date: 12/07/2006 - 08:37 pm Title: Chapter 25
Great chapter sweets. Moving the plot along nicely. Love the insight into their thoughts. Dun dun dun....the soul!
Date: 12/07/2006 - 02:41 pm Title: Chapter 25
I thought the chapter was fine. I liked it being a bit ambiguous. It had almost a dreamy like quality. I thought it was well written and interesting. Thanks for writing.
Date: 12/07/2006 - 12:24 pm Title: Chapter 25
Oh, no, no, no, no, no.
Date: 12/07/2006 - 07:16 am Title: Chapter 25
I didn't find it confusing; I wouldn't worry too much about it. It did take me a second to figure out it was Willow's POV in the last paragraph, but really that's about it ! And that was just good writing :D
Continuing to really enjoy this story!
Date: 12/07/2006 - 06:03 am Title: Chapter 25
I'm so glad Spike was able to get himself out of the basement, it's good to see him getting better. Loved Buffy's thoughts about Spike's duster. Can't wait to read more. Great chapter!
Date: 12/07/2006 - 04:41 am Title: Chapter 25
great chapter
Date: 12/07/2006 - 04:34 am Title: Chapter 25
Definitely not confusing! I'm so glad that Buffy finally found Spike again (or that Spike finally dragged himself out of the basement, as the case seems to be) and that they're at least reunited, even if Buffy does seem to be a little mad...please don't let her be too hard on him, the poor guy. I loved the bit about his coat, that was beautifully written. and now Willow's finally gonna tell Buffy about what happened!!!
Date: 12/07/2006 - 03:08 am Title: Chapter 25
loved it. i guess buffy's gonna do some yelling and spike is gonna act all calm and badass before she realizes the new change that has taken place. loved it. please post soon. and the chapter wasn't confusing to me at all.
Date: 12/07/2006 - 01:24 am Title: Chapter 25
Ooo! Very exciting! I hope Buffy gets the answers she's looking for! I can't wait to see what happens next! Love it!
Date: 12/07/2006 - 01:19 am Title: Chapter 25
cant wait to see what happens next!!!!!!!! :D
Date: 12/06/2006 - 11:11 pm Title: Chapter 25
Brilliant stuff hun, loved how you made me empathise with Buffy in this chap. Particularly liked the part where she retrieved his duster from that Fledge *grins*
Author's Response: What a doll you are *wink wink*
Date: 12/06/2006 - 10:57 pm Title: Chapter 25
didnt understand it
Author's Response: I'm sorry sweety! What about it was confusing, so I know what I need to fix?