Date: 11/21/2006 - 05:27 am Title: Chapter 26
Lovely little chappyie.......Willow and Tara, lovely getting them together......now what to do about Dawn....hmmmmmm.
Kimber
Date: 11/21/2006 - 04:41 am Title: Chapter 26
Uh oh....I think Ben's going to be trouble! Poor Dawn, Glory's hitting her. Update soon please!
Date: 11/20/2006 - 09:38 pm Title: Chapter 26
loved it
Date: 11/20/2006 - 08:43 pm Title: Chapter 26
Actually I kinda agree with the comments about Dawn. It was nice to have her around... at the beginning.
Author's Response: What beginning? She was in one chapter. I'm sorry you feel that way, but there's nothing I can do about it now. The rest of the story is already written and I'm not about to change anything. If you have a problem with it, you just don't have to read. I happen to like what I'm doing and that's all that really matters.
Date: 11/20/2006 - 08:03 pm Title: Chapter 26
cant wait to see what happens next!!!!!!!!!!!! :D
Date: 11/20/2006 - 05:08 pm Title: Chapter 26
I like the new developements in the plot. I look forward to finding out how the new storylines play out. Great chapter!
Date: 11/20/2006 - 03:37 pm Title: Chapter 26
hmm, i actually think it's good to have dawn around. i agree that things would get boring if it was all about buffy and spike. you still have me interested and i can't wait to see if anything more happens with ben.
Date: 11/20/2006 - 03:07 pm Title: Chapter 26
Mmm when Buffy is convinced that Ben is obsessed with Liz it can be that he'll start with Buffy now. She should be careful. Spike had the same thought...
But they should watch out for Dawn too seems Glory is abusing her.
And Willow spilled some secrets; I'll bet she feels a lot better now after she did.
Date: 11/20/2006 - 03:06 pm Title: Chapter 26
I like the addition of Dawn and the realization that Ben is obsessed.
Date: 11/20/2006 - 03:04 pm Title: Chapter 26
cool a new chapter :) I liked it, although I do agree with Elize. Dawn is a nice character but this fic is based on a couple and their babies, not Dawn and her problems. Looking forward to more though ;)
Author's Response: It's not really just about Buffy and Spike. There are other people involved and I just can't forget about them. Just writing fluff all the time can get boring and I needed to keep things interesting. Dawn has an important part and I felt like bringing her into it. It wouldn't last for long and I do have more with Buffy and Spike. Patience is a virtue=)
Date: 11/20/2006 - 03:00 pm Title: Chapter 26
Dawn once again... I liked the writing but the whole story about Dawn is getting a little boring. Could you maybe focus the next chapters on Spike/Buffy/their babies ? Dawn was a cool idea for one chapter or two but I dunno, it's less spuffy now.
Author's Response: No, sorry, Dawn has an important part in the story and I'm going to focus on that right now. It's only for about one or two more chapters, then it more focuses on Buffy and Spike. I figured just doing them was boring and I needed some kind of conflict, but it will be plenty Spuffy. The story is almost over, anyway. I have a few more chapters to go. They will be dramatic before I get to the happy Spuffy ending. Hopefully you'll stick with it, but I would understand if you don't. I know it's not for everyone.