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Reviewer: sara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/25/2006 - 04:23 am Title: Chapter 27

hope everything works out with dawn. loved the chapter!

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/23/2006 - 08:22 am Title: Chapter 27

I liked Spike and Tara's talk. I feel so bad for Dawn, i'm glad she has Buffy and Spike to lean on. Good update.~ Happy Thanksgiving! :D

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/22/2006 - 11:49 pm Title: Chapter 27

more please

Reviewer: Kimber Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/22/2006 - 10:14 pm Title: Chapter 27

Okay, color me confused.....but just how old are the twins now....it was just like they were born and now their walking.....and what's Emma doing?

As for Dawn.......it's your story.....it she fits into the story for you....that's all that is important.....

Kimber

Author's Response: Well, we'll say that the twins are almost a year old. Buffy mentioned to Lindsey that she had them about six months ago, so they're older than that now. I tend to skip around sometimes. I don't really say how much time has passed, but I would usually reveal it somewhere in the chapter. They just grow up so fast. Emma is still around. It's hard to always fit them in there, but I wanted to put something about Buffy and Spike spending time with the kids, so no one would forget about them. I hope that made some sense...lol! Thanks for reading=)

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/22/2006 - 09:16 pm Title: Chapter 27

Happy Thanksgiving to you too :)
I'm glad Dawn took the courage and asked Buffy to help. And you know what? I'm not mad because Glory died because the way she treated Dawn wasn't right. But the was to ill (drug addicted) to notice.
I loved the update, don't worry.

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/22/2006 - 08:21 pm Title: Chapter 27

Wow....they have a lot of kids in their house now. Is Dawn going to stay with them permanently? Update soon please!

Reviewer: trish Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/22/2006 - 06:56 pm Title: Chapter 27

wow, i feel so bad for dawn. i love her character and i'm glad to see her in the story. i hope everything works out for her. great emotional chapter!

Reviewer: rosie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/22/2006 - 06:28 pm Title: Chapter 27

cant wait to see what happens next!!!!! :D

Reviewer: Jennifer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/22/2006 - 05:27 pm Title: Chapter 27

I like the inclusion of Dawn into the story, to me it shows that they aren't so selfishly wrapped up in themselves that they ignore others. (as kinda happened in the series)

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