Date: 10/12/2006 - 03:45 am Title: Chapter Three
great jo!!!! will really got angry at the whole 'nude art' thing. i think he overreacted a little too much but considering that he's crushing on him i kinda understand! on with the next chapter......
Date: 10/11/2006 - 08:05 pm Title: Chapter Three
Buffy fell asleep on the couch? But she has her own room. Ah.. insomnia, kind of. I wonder what happened with Buffy to cause this.
*gg* So Buffy was a nude model before. And Spike can't bear the thought that others will see her naked. *nods* Jealous, indeed.
Argh.. I know a cliffhanger when I see one *g* ~ Till next chapter :)
Date: 10/11/2006 - 07:10 pm Title: Chapter Three
So I've just realised something--no matter how into detail you do or don't go, whenever I'm reading your fics, it's not like they're stting in some dream state place where there's not really any settin, it just is....if that makes any sense at all. I guess I'm trying to say that through the characters, the dialouge, and just the general plot, you do uch a great job of making everything seem like it's happened and you're just reading some recount of it that I don't have some bland/nonexistent background for the actions in my head, everything has a room and there's the hall and his living room....I'm really not making sense am I? Well, my not making sense thing applies to all of your fics btw....
and this really is something I did just realise--blame th chocolate :)
I really would like to know why Buffy left Sunnydale--and maybe some more about the time they spent that summer they lived in the same place...then again, the present is a godo time to focus on, too :D Whichever you do,I'm sure I'm going to enjoy it...if you dn't believe me then just go ahead and post and see :P (I'm staying away from choclate from now on, just fyi)
Date: 10/11/2006 - 09:18 am Title: Chapter Three
Well , you know..I couldn't resist another story from you !
This is deliciously promising ! I love your characterizations !
Date: 10/11/2006 - 07:50 am Title: Chapter Three
great chapter
Date: 10/11/2006 - 06:56 am Title: Chapter Three
Loved the chapter! Can't wait to learn about Buffy's reasons for leaving Sunnydale.
Date: 10/11/2006 - 04:43 am Title: Chapter Three
EVIL-- Pure, unadulterated evil!!!! What else would drive you to leave me hanging like this? You get me all riled up watching the fight escalate from seemingly nowhere, and then they are passionately hugging, and then you drop the DUN DUN DUN bombshell-- only, it's timed to go off later! OK, all calm now....clearly, you did a very good job in getting the reader to get emotionally involved in the scene! ;) I like their relationship; you really show a very friendly, loving vibe. Almost like friends that can pick up where they left off, even after long absences. Oh, and it's a "fetal" position (when Buffy was sleeping on the couch), not a fetus position. ;) Keep 'em coming-- I am really getting into this one quickly.
Date: 10/11/2006 - 04:43 am Title: Chapter Three
EVIL-- Pure, unadulterated evil!!!! What else would drive you to leave me hanging like this? You get me all riled up watching the fight escalate from seemingly nowhere, and then they are passionately hugging, and then you drop the DUN DUN DUN bombshell-- only, it's timed to go off later! OK, all calm now....clearly, you did a very good job in getting the reader to get emotionally involved in the scene! ;) I like their relationship; you really show a very friendly, loving vibe. Almost like friends that can pick up where they left off, even after long absences. Oh, and it's a "fetal" position (when Buffy was sleeping on the couch), not a fetus position. ;) Keep 'em coming-- I am really getting into this one quickly.
Date: 10/11/2006 - 03:28 am Title: Chapter Three
good update
Date: 10/11/2006 - 12:12 am Title: Chapter Three
Good chapter. :)
Date: 10/10/2006 - 11:56 pm Title: Chapter Three
Brat, you're evil lieaving this chapter right there!?!?!? Now I really can't wait for the next chapter.
Great work, I love it!
Date: 10/10/2006 - 10:58 pm Title: Chapter Three
Can't wait to find out why Buffy left Sunnydale! Great chapter!
Date: 10/10/2006 - 10:57 pm Title: Chapter Three
I really enjoy this fic, I hope you update soon!
Date: 10/10/2006 - 10:24 pm Title: Chapter Three
Looking forward to the explanation. Lovely chapter.
Date: 10/10/2006 - 09:49 pm Title: Chapter Three
Glad she brought up... you're not really my brother.
Enjoying the story.
Date: 10/10/2006 - 09:41 pm Title: Chapter Three
I can't wait to find out what happened! Update soon please!
Date: 10/10/2006 - 09:32 pm Title: Chapter Three
You are so evil. How could you end it there?