Date: 10/22/2006 - 02:38 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
William doesn't look well how Buffy saw him... and he is trying to 'get a life' like Buffy told him? That doesn't sound like him... and now Buffy is sad too. Don't call Buffy back when she left notes doesn't sound like him either, the man he was before. I wonder what's the matter now.
And now Buffy seeks attention from William? Did/does it function? He was busy with Lilah ... *reads on*
Date: 10/21/2006 - 05:28 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
At least Buffy knows who she is ;) Have to say though that throwing Lilah in is interesting...she's not in a lot of fics :)
Date: 10/21/2006 - 05:19 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
Well, at least she's honest about it! LOL. Maybe we'll get another shag in the hallway? Pretty please? Or a quickie in the bathroom always works. Something to releive the testosterone and estrogen poisoning that is making these two hurt each other like this! Great chapter, and I can't wait to read the next.
Date: 10/21/2006 - 01:58 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
Oh, how I love it when they're both acting silly and jealous. This is going to be good. Thanks for updating so often!
Date: 10/21/2006 - 01:39 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
I think William and Buffy are both acting like children! Great chapter!
Date: 10/20/2006 - 11:05 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
Great chapter. Love Buffy's jealousy!
Date: 10/20/2006 - 10:14 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
hehe, good chapter. :)
Date: 10/20/2006 - 07:46 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
Hehe...this is going to get VERY interesting I think! Update soon please!
Date: 10/20/2006 - 05:11 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
okay....lol. go buffy!!!! i mean, she did bring this on herself but william isn't making things better by acting like a big baby....even though buffy did the same thing earlier in the story!! lol. both of them are just big babies!!!! loved it post soon.
Date: 10/20/2006 - 03:28 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
Love her attitude.
Date: 10/20/2006 - 01:57 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
loved it
Date: 10/20/2006 - 01:46 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
Yikes! Things are really bad between Buffy and William right now, the rest of the party should be interesting. Great chapter.
Date: 10/20/2006 - 01:35 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
Oh, I think William had that coming! Good for the Buffster.
Date: 10/20/2006 - 01:31 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
I kinda really like Buffy in this chapter. She understands what she's doing...well to some extent. And I do think at the moment William deserves it. Looking forward to more.
Date: 10/20/2006 - 01:04 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
One of your stories is making me want to slap the hell out of Spike, and the other wants me to bitch slap Buffy. You're good.
Date: 10/20/2006 - 01:02 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
Did I pick a good time to start reading again?? It got too angsty for me so I thought I'd let some time go by to let them begin to get together.
Man do you do a good job of creating a jealous situation ... as a reader I can really feel it coming off of both of them. Are these two good together ? I can't tell yet. He is wonderful (he always is) but she is so immature and really has nothing to bring to the relationship at all (guess that is you whole point eh?). I do know that Lilah is NEVER good ... yelch.
Maybe Fred would be a good match is this Buffy isn't going to shape up. tee hee