Date: 11/12/2006 - 06:34 am Title: Chapter Four
“Right. I believe that the universe somehow gypped me. It gave me the talent to set others up, but it came with a catch,” Buffy told him bitterly.
“That you have to be alone?” He seemed shocked. --
Well this is just getting more and more brilliant. I love her view and their dynamic, and I can't wait for those little moments. Hell, he already seems smitten. Amazing chapter.
Date: 10/22/2006 - 01:44 pm Title: Chapter Four
You do a great job of protraying her a despondent and hopeless to the point of being crass and cold. He is so patient and understanding of her ... most guys would run ... but of course, he is not most guys. (he is OUR guy)tee hee SOL (don't we wish)
Date: 10/16/2006 - 02:08 am Title: Chapter Four
i kinda feel the way that buffy does in this story. she believes that everyone is destined for love but her and she's bitter and angry because of it. i'm like that in a way. loved it lots.
Date: 10/14/2006 - 03:52 am Title: Chapter Four
keep up the great work