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Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/13/2006 - 07:42 am Title: Chapter Sixteen

His uncle better not pull him away now and make a liar out of our boy. I don't think I could bare that. Great chapter, love their budding relationship.

Reviewer: sirc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/31/2006 - 06:17 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen

I think there's a glitch here or something. I am constantly seeing deep written as Addiep, for some reason though it is mostly in this story. I am sure you don't do this on purpose, but it happens very often. For instance in this chaper - "She swallowed and took a Addiep breath" - see? Yet, there are 'deep's that are written correctly. I don't know why or what is making this happen. :( For the longest time I couldn't decipher what you were trying to say at all when I ran into this. I thought that you were doing this specifically, but after about 5 chapter I realized that something else is doing this. It's really annoying, though *pout*

Other than that - well done. Sorry about the ranting :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/24/2006 - 08:20 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen

Cute :) Loved it, how they are getting nearer. And yet: the glimpse that Spike may have to go soon.

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/24/2006 - 03:28 am Title: Chapter Sixteen

loved it

Reviewer: vs in nj Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/24/2006 - 12:52 am Title: Chapter Sixteen

Loved this chapter. I'm so glad you're finishing this one. I've missed it.

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/24/2006 - 12:51 am Title: Chapter Sixteen

loved it. i'm guessing that it's all gonna come crashing down soon though. *takes a deep breath* i can take it! bring the angst on! hope buffy isn't too mad that spike has been lying to her. great job.

Reviewer: Kimmie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/24/2006 - 12:17 am Title: Chapter Sixteen

Great Kiss !!!! (notice the capitalization of Kiss ... it deserved it)

That was a sweet scene --- to see Spike shocked into not knowing what exactly to do. I love his desire to take care of her.

Not liking the forboding thought that his uncle might break them up but I guess they need some obstacles other than her rampant insecurities to overcome.

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