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Reviewer: Elizabeth Anne Summers Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/23/2007 - 10:36 am Title: A really real date

you can't stop there!!!!

Author's Response: I know. I'm evil. It's a thing. But I just couldn't stop myself. Thanks for the review. :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2007 - 04:11 pm Title: The evil clutches of ignorance

Back to school ... so Buffy is ready now. And already met another girl, a potential friend. ~ Hehe William has another job now, tutor? And a bit risky to promise all (but William won't use her). This was fun.
And the banner? Doesn't look bad :) I don't understand much of the work of making one but you managed to put "all their faces" into it as they appear in the story. That fits perfect :)

Reviewer: SixStringBaby Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2007 - 07:10 am Title: The evil clutches of ignorance

I happen to like rambling author's notes, thank you very much...I'm so happy about this chapter, what with new characters being introduced and foreshadowing of naughtiness. Bring on the smut! Hahahaha

Reviewer: TammyAsh666 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/18/2007 - 10:54 pm Title: The evil clutches of ignorance

The ending with them was cute. I see much sparks between these two. I can't believe I'm going to say this, but I'm sure he'll soon have her forgetting all about Spike. I also think the banner is pretty and would love to see it bigger. The way I do it and I think others do the same is uploading the picture in photobucket or something like that, and then putting that code in your chapter. I have a feeling of how you did it in here and those are always too small. Anyway, I'm still loving this story. Can't wait for more=)

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I did what you suggested and it worked a treat. Yay!

Reviewer: tis-kit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/18/2007 - 09:51 pm Title: The evil clutches of ignorance

Superb as always. Your character interaction is absolutely sublime.

I am enjoying this story so very much.

Ps: Gorgeous banner: I hope someone can help you with the sizing; I'm useless with such things.

Reviewer: Brat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/18/2007 - 07:29 pm Title: The evil clutches of ignorance

Hey there. Sorry I didn't get back to you...didn't have a chance to check my mail until late last night. But, you got help, so you're good! :)

Reviewer: Stephanie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/18/2007 - 07:04 pm Title: The evil clutches of ignorance

Oh my gosh, best story i've read on here in a while!. I'm soo happy I decided to stay with it. I love it!! Its fantastic and so unique! I just cant wait till the next chapter. I just read all 16 chapters in like, 15 minutes I got completely hooked!
You rock. And I just LOVE the idea you used from that episode. Completely brilliant! You got me hooked so now Im gonna want to check up on it every 5 minutes. hahaha
~Stephanie~

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/18/2007 - 05:06 pm Title: The evil clutches of ignorance

I loved Buffy's interaction with Rachel, and Spike. The closing scene was fun. Great chapter! ~ The banner is very nice... it's kind of a shame it isn't bigger though, but I still liked it! :D

Author's Response: I know, the banner is way too small but this is the biggest I could get it to upload. I've seen other banners here that are much larger so if anyone would like to hand me a clue on how to do that I would very much appreciate it. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: daydreamer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/18/2007 - 02:23 pm Title: The evil clutches of ignorance

great chapter, very fun :)

Reviewer: Toni Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/18/2007 - 01:01 pm Title: The evil clutches of ignorance

I am so loving this story! Humor with all the other goodies too!

Reviewer: Elizabeth Anne Summers Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/18/2007 - 10:51 am Title: The evil clutches of ignorance

Aw dammit and here I thought I'd get smut out of that, lmao

Reviewer: turnedbyspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/13/2007 - 06:17 pm Title: What happened in my head

YES!!! beautiful speech that Buffy gave, absolutely beautiful. And they made up! things are gonna be happy again, yes?

Reviewer: turnedbyspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/13/2007 - 06:10 pm Title: The Monster in the Man

ooh, wow. intense bit with insight into William's hatred of Spike...poor William. Now it's time to delve into the mytery of Buffy's sickness. Excellent chapter!

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/13/2007 - 12:48 pm Title: What happened in my head

Even if Buffy still doesn't know why she got ill the worked things about Spike~William out. Good enough to talk to him again.
She explained it well. And William believes her now too :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/13/2007 - 12:48 pm Title: What happened in my head

Even if Buffy still doesn't know why she got ill the worked things about Spike~William out. Good enough to talk to him again.
She explained it well. And William believes her now too :)

Reviewer: Brat Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/12/2007 - 03:51 am Title: What happened in my head

So very sweet. The path is set for them to start healing it seems. :) Love it.

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Date: 01/12/2007 - 03:42 am Title: The Monster in the Man

Great chapter!! That was way intense. I'm glad they got that out, they needed to.

Reviewer: Dirktavian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/11/2007 - 05:42 am Title: What happened in my head

Aww... I got a shout-out~ Yay me!! ;) Seriously though, what a gracious reader to appreciate her audience. Again, LOVED IT! I like the way that "dragging her into the darkness, where she belongs" was interpreted as bringing her back home. Of course, it was hard to see it that way on the show, when taken at face value, but you are a clever girl! A great analogy, since the main thing that Spike wanted was to not be afraid and to embrace all of her, even the "darkness." In a way, with Will teaching her to fight, knowing what she's been doing in her mind for 6 years, he is again encouraging her to be who she really is.

And shirtless Spike/Will....mmmm, hot. "Nuf said! ;) I giggled that she was so distracted by his state of partial undress. And I'm not quite sure how to interpret that shiver, when she tells him how much she felt for Spike, but again, just to depict such a viseral response is downright nummy! But finally, like Spike, the emotional floodgates open, and I love the way he clings to her with relief that she didn't hate him all those years.

I guess just like Buffy, you've given us a "breakthrough!" Fabulous update! Keep feeding that muse, because this is seriously getting good. ;)

Reviewer: daydreamer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/10/2007 - 11:16 pm Title: What happened in my head

I love this chapter, maybe cause I love an honest Buffy. I still wonder is there was some sort of traumatic event that made Buffy create Sunnydale. Great update :)

Reviewer: tis-kit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/10/2007 - 10:03 pm Title: What happened in my head

I'm delighted to see an update so soon.

Wonderfully emotional chapter again. Buffy's explanation to William is so telling, particularly the way she switches from referring to "Spike" in one moment and "you" in the next. The concept that William brought her back into the world as opposed to Spike pulling her into the dark is genius!

Thank you for a brilliant read.

Reviewer: shelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/10/2007 - 04:33 pm Title: What happened in my head

awww! Excellent!! loved it!!!!!!

Reviewer: demona424 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/10/2007 - 03:58 pm Title: What happened in my head

That was so sweet it made my eyes wet! My favorite "Normal Again" fic by far!

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/10/2007 - 02:57 pm Title: What happened in my head

why do i feel like the other shoe is about to drop??? i could be wrong though. loved it lots and lots. more soon.

Reviewer: Elizabeth Anne Summers Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/10/2007 - 01:31 pm Title: What happened in my head

Ohhhhhhh sweetness

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/10/2007 - 08:46 am Title: What happened in my head

I'm so glad Buffy and William talked things out. Loved the chapter!

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