oooooh poor spikey! my face is red from just reading his embarassment (thanks Tina! :p) but i can tell u that it was that way for me. the guy was more experienced and whatever *he sucked* and i was embarassed so yeah, my heart goes out to Spike. now....let's see if the next chapter will make me FORGET my first time. *for real, he really sucked*

Author's Response: Oh wow, sorry to dredge up bad memories. Mine wasn't anything spectacular either, believe me, ughhhhh! But, here in spuffyland - all will be well, *winks*. THanks for the review boo. Kisses.

yea for virgin William!!!! he is so very sweet

Author's Response: Thankee hon - he's adorable isn't he?

Sory honey not a man but I showed my hubbie and he got a little hot under the collar so I guess your doing good so far....On to the next chapter I go.....

Author's Response: Giggles, that's awesome. Yay me for getting a guy worked up. And of course you got to take advantage of that I presume, tee hee. Thanks for the lovely review sweety.

Oh, the awkwardnes of the first time, I remember it well *giggling at the memories*...I'm glad it wasn't all smooth and perfect from the start, that would have been so unreal. I'm very happy about Buffy knowing William's lack of experience, because now Buffy will be extra patient and William doesn't have to act like he knows what he's doing. I think that this way there will be less pressure and more fun learning to be had (I just wonder what kind of naughty things your muse will have Buffy teaching...I'm also guessing that there will be more learning and trying of new things for Buffy too...) Hmm, I can't wait for the first lesson! It's been a wet month already (and I'm not talking about the weather here *dirty smirk*...) and I have a feeling that more floods are coming this way...*giggles excitedly*
-Katriina-

Author's Response: Yeah, had to have it more realistic, there really is no way he would have been an instant expert. LMAO, oh my muse is cooking up some truly naughty fun things for Buffy to try, and William too of course. Once she brings him completely out of his sexual shell........ it's on. Yup, Buffy will be trying new things herself as well - due to William being so untainted and her first adult relationship outside of highschool. HAHAHAHAHA, wet month huh??? Well, more showers ahead in this forecast sweety. Thanks for the awesome review, more to, ahem, cum soon.

I am enjoying the sequel, I am so glad Buffy is taking him by the hand to make his first time really memorable........poor William in thinking it would be all over, I think it makes for a very romantic yet erotic experience.....can't wait for the actual "deflowering", I just know it is going to be a hummm dinger and thanks

Author's Response: You're welcome sweety, and thank you for the lovely review. Yes, she has a soft spot already for William and wants to be sure he enjoys his first time as much as possible.

You´re evil??? You´re more than that. Something worse. But I don´t know how to call you. *gg*

It was so nice to read. He wants t do every thing right and then she gets frustated. But now she knows why he´s acting this strange and can do it right. So finally we are going to read this and it would be really interesting what a male species thinks of it.

I want to read more and I think the way you did it was great. Now you´re back and me too, so give me something to read!!!!!

hugs and kisses. Caro

Author's Response: LOL, I'll do my best to update soon hon. I'm happy you liked the chapter. Yes, next chappy will have him on a road to discovery, one of which he won't be able to get enough of. Thanks for the great review sweety, *hugs*.

Awe, so cute!!! And I'm sure Buffy will have a rather apt pupil ;)

Author's Response: Tee hee, that he will be, a very eager pupil at that. Thanks for the review hon.

That moment outside her door... HOT.. :-)
Loved it and rather nice to see that he's kind of insecure beeing his first time and everything.. The fact that he isn't just this: "I may be virgin, but I know all about what makes you and me tick baby" -guy. Wonderful and thank you so much for the fast update on this. Looking forward to more, and sends your muse and you a lot of ... hmm.... whatever you need to make the words down on keyboard :-) lol

Author's Response: I'm happy you liked that moment outside her door... I simply couldn't resist making William have a bold moment. Glad to see you like the realism of the situation too - that he's not an instant 'sexpert'. Thank you so much for the lovely review sweety. I hope to have the next chappy posted by the weekend.

I'm definitely liking the William as a virgin storyline. Gotta say Buffy is one lucky girl to get to be William's first teacher in the art of love. ;-) I enjoyed reading William's thoughts throughout the chapter, I wonder if he'll ever learn what the word 'Spike' means... lol! Loved the interlude so far, can't wait to read more. Fantastic update! :D

Author's Response: Oh yeah, she knows she's lucky too. She's going to make sure his first time is as special as it can be. Yup, he'll find out what Spike means, then of course blush like hell, lol. Thanks so much for the review hon.

Hey Sweetie!
So, I've read now both chapters and girl... you totally rock! *grins*
I so love the sequel and you are a bad, bad woman stopping here. *whines*
Poor William - so confused and frightend and also sooo sweet. He's an adorable virgin and it is good that Buffy knows about his... uhm... problem. *giggles*

I hope you have a wonderful weekend, hon and you come back soon with a very inspired muse and the next chapter. :)

*hugs ya tight* kitty

Author's Response: Hi, *waves*, I soooo glad you liked it. Yes, I can be evil I know... but someone has to do it right??? I definetely wanted to try writing the most adorable, sweet, and inexperienced William. What girl in their right mind wouldn't want to coach him??? Thanks for the review hon, ttyl.

True, men will do a few jerky motions when it was their first time. Their hips just won't move like that, but after a while they will. Worse still, they don't learn about a woman's hot buttons and pleasures like flicking the clit to multiply the pleasure until the woman teaches them, and even so, sometimes they forget.

Hee... I guess I'm one of those women who get to teach the man. It was very fun, and you get to teach him the unique way to pleasure you instead of being tainted by another woman. Better still, you get to watch the awe and wonderment play across his face as he experience this for the first time.

So far this chapter has been very realistic, I don't quite believe the others that have William/Spike to be a very fast learner. While there *are* guys like that, most men are just mortals. Mind blowing sex comes with lots of practice, and not just from the first time. I'm glad to see that you've chosen to set the pace and have William really act untried instead of going for the easy path and have him learn real quickly (though the cunnilingus seemed to be miraculous - most men are not that great the first time, even when they strive to please). It certainly makes a better read by being realistic.

Cheers, I love your stories, I'm not criticizing you or anything - there is a probability of men being that great the first time at giving oral sex to a woman. Wonderful, lovely read... definitely looking forward to more!

Author's Response: Very true. I had to laugh when you said sometimes they forget. I think its either that or they get lazy, lol. I envy you that you had an 'untainted' man... ah what I wouldn't have given back in my single days. Yes, I didn't want to take the easy-cheesy road of him being an instant expert. It just wouldn't be as much fun, nor realistic either. The cunninlingus was a strok of luck on his part. He was merely searching every part of her and experimenting... lucky for her she enjoyed it. I loved your review sweety and of course take no offense at all. Thank you so much, if you ever want to contact me to give me hints on what goes on between a virgin male and an experienced female, I'm all ears.

AWW HOW SWEET! im so glad she didnt freak out and is going to show him how to do it. i love this story and am happy u updated. please update as soon as u can, i cant wait to read more. thanx

Author's Response: Nah, I didn't want her to freak out, after all, they were already engaged in their activities and that would have been cruel to William. I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter sweety, thanks for the wonderful review... I hope to have the next chapter up by the weekend.

Looking forward to more! Great chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks sweety.