Date: 10/20/2006 - 09:22 pm Title: The Bottom Line
I like the start of this one! Even when Buffy wasn't able to say yet that she is sorry, she feels remorse now. That's good.
Looking forward to read more of it.
Author's Response: I'm glad you are enjoying it. Thanks for the encouragement!
Date: 10/20/2006 - 07:08 pm Title: The Bottom Line
Ooh boy. I'm hot now Can't wait for more...hoping that she might even say the words "I'm sorry" and he'll let her without saying "You don't have to!" LOL. Love it, more please!
Author's Response: I'm not sure that Buffy could actually manage an apology-- Buffy and words are un-mixy things. Buffy more of an Action-Girl! I'm glad you are liking it so far.
Date: 10/19/2006 - 04:09 pm Title: The Bottom Line
great story so far but evil cliffhanger
Author's Response: Yes, very evil! Gotta leave 'em clammoring for more. :) Very soon, I promise. Thank you for your feedback!
Date: 10/19/2006 - 03:25 pm Title: The Bottom Line
Great start. More please :)
Author's Response: Soon, very soon-- I promise. Thanks for the encouragement.
Date: 10/19/2006 - 03:23 pm Title: The Bottom Line
it's good, but i think talking needed to be done instead of going right to the sex. that seems to be buffy's answer to everything in that season.
Author's Response: While I agree that Buffy *should* have done more communicating, I really wanted to convey where she was at emotionally during Season 6. I wanted it to seem believable-- something that would have happened between the characters when the cameras weren't rolling. And as for jumping straight to the sex, I''m afraid that's why Season 6 was one of my favorites ever-- more naked Spike! Thanks for the encouragement and constructive feedback.
Date: 10/19/2006 - 03:05 pm Title: The Bottom Line
nice start. would've been nice if buffy had actually apologized for the pain she had caused in that episode. I always hated that she never said she was sorry for that. anyway, please post soon. great job. more please!!!!
Author's Response: As a chronic apologizer, I really disliked that Buffy never verbalized her disappointment in herself to Spike, either. But I wanted to keep this story really authentic with the feel of Season 6 characterizations-- as emotionally stunted as she was, I wanted Buffy to seem like Buffy. Thanks for the encouragement!