Date: 02/20/2007 - 05:49 am Title: Chapter Two
Would have been more naughty if you made William 17. I mean what... they can watch a show where a 200 plus vampire screws a 16 year old virgin but people might complain about a 20 something woman having sex with a young man?
Buffy having sex with a 18 year old while she's married might make her a cheating whore but theres nothing else wrong with it. Not like he's her real son.
I think i might enjoy this fic, although i wish William had a little bit more spine to him. Not the Bad Ass Spike but more of a happy medium where he's semi confident and has been in a few scraps.
Date: 10/31/2006 - 05:51 pm Title: Chapter Two
"Please don't think I'm anything like your father." A crystal clear example of Angel trying to butter Buffy up. Too bad that she doesn't know him (or at least that side of him) enough to see that.
Poor William :) It is going to be a very very long summer indeed :D
Great chapter!
Date: 10/29/2006 - 09:43 am Title: Chapter Two
Love the start to this story, can't wait to see where it goes. Four years isn't much of an age difference, so I have no idea why ppl would have a problem with it. Look foward to your next update!
Date: 10/28/2006 - 04:45 am Title: Chapter Two
A) Not gratuitous. I know exactly why you wrote them and I hope they keep away all trolls!
b) Nice story so far. Poor William. He's obviously headed for treacherous waters.
I'm looking forward to more.
Sd
Date: 10/27/2006 - 09:36 pm Title: Chapter Two
Aww poor william. Now if I was buffy I'd be oogling william a little bit more but thats just me, lol.
Date: 10/27/2006 - 03:46 pm Title: Chapter Two
William may be shy but he sees a lot (means he can think how awkward it must be for Buffy to have a step-son hardly younger than her).
Yeah, but Liam took it out (the William is there now) on him by ignoring him. Well William came between the two (Darla and Liam) and he lost (was lost) when they got divorced. His mother working to and he stayed behind. (And I wonder a bit if Buffy fell in love with Liam because of the age difference; she never had a very good father.)
But when William says that Liam's response to him is the same as every year than what Liam said to Buffy because of not telling her doesn't sound honest.
And with 'Buffy's little voice' the next weeks will sure be interesting.
And that means it will not only be a long summer, it will be interesting too. *g*
Date: 10/27/2006 - 01:32 pm Title: Chapter Two
Oh my...it's funny to think of a 22 year old playing Mrs. Robinson, but poor William seems like such an innocent, it looks like that's the dynamic for now. I wonder if Buffy's own immaturity is part of why she would flirt/tease so obviously when she's married - or if it's just that she can't resist William on a deeper level.
I'm really looking forward to learning more about Buffy and William's backstories, and seeing how they affect how the story progresses.
Great job!
Date: 10/27/2006 - 07:08 am Title: Chapter Two
What a predicament for poor William! Very cute-- that strange interaction that they are developing. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 10/27/2006 - 05:24 am Title: Chapter Two
Long summer indeed. Challenges to over come for sure, and I can hardly wait. Really fabulous beginning.
Date: 10/26/2006 - 11:35 pm Title: Chapter Two
ohhhhhhhhhhh baby it's going to be nice long hot summer. ahhhhhhhh dump the ass and go with William, atleast he is a man. more more more more
Date: 10/26/2006 - 07:23 pm Title: Chapter Two
I say angst away. I really enjoyed the first two chapters and I'll be interested to see how the story progresses.
Date: 10/26/2006 - 06:47 pm Title: Chapter Two
loving it
Date: 10/26/2006 - 02:57 pm Title: Chapter Two
I like it so far, seems promising. Look forward to more.
Date: 10/26/2006 - 02:42 pm Title: Chapter Two
Good job highlighting Liam's deceit in the true nature of his relationship with William. The attraction between Buffy and William is already bubbling under the surface, and I'm looking forward to them struggling against it.
Date: 10/26/2006 - 02:32 pm Title: Chapter Two
Haha no chasing me off, amazing chapter!
Date: 10/26/2006 - 12:03 pm Title: Chapter Two
Flirty Buffy just can't resist Will ,can she? Interesting
Date: 10/26/2006 - 11:07 am Title: Chapter Two
I LOVE this version of William! He's adorably sweet, shy and conflicted. I can't wait to see how this story proceedes.
Date: 10/26/2006 - 12:51 am Title: Chapter Two
yeah another chapter! lovin it!
Date: 10/26/2006 - 12:48 am Title: Chapter Two
I eagerly await more.
Date: 10/26/2006 - 12:35 am Title: Chapter Two
Awwww, what did his parents do to poor William? I hope Buffy will be the one to raise his self esteem. I want to find out what Eve said against him.
Date: 10/26/2006 - 12:09 am Title: Chapter Two
Hmm, wonder what those allegations were that Eve made... could be salacious.
I really, really liked this chapter. Already I can tell there's going to be a lot of sexual tension between Buffy and Will, and it's going to tear Buffy up inside- which I suppose would be where some of the forewarned angst comes in. Beyond that, I won't speculate. It would be a bit pointless at this early stage. I'm ready for whatever you plan to throw our way though.
Date: 10/26/2006 - 12:00 am Title: Chapter Two
why doi feel like angel is a complete asshole when it comes to william??? maybe it's just me. anyway, loved it lots. can already tell that buffy and william will be doing things that they are not supposed to! he he he!!! great job. loved it sooo much.
Date: 10/25/2006 - 11:34 pm Title: Chapter Two
AWESOME! So I guess it's still the same update schedule as BHTFY
Great chapter. Loved it!
Sexual tension is RIiIiIiIiIiSiNg! (sing-songey voice xD)
Lol, hope too read more soon.
See ya!
Date: 10/25/2006 - 11:32 pm Title: Chapter Two
Wow...is it getting hot in here or is it just me? Hehe...I can't wait to see how they deal with this! Update soon please!
Date: 10/25/2006 - 10:34 pm Title: Chapter Two
If Buffy tries to bind and gag that voice, I'm getting out my scissors! lol! Good chapter. Shy William is always a treat. :)