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Reviewer: Tanja Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/06/2007 - 11:59 am Title: Chapter Four

Just a few lines to say I'm really enjoying this story. Naughty games in the water... yum!. Eh eh. I can't wait to see what'll happens next. Great job so far!

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/03/2006 - 04:25 pm Title: Chapter Four

You're writing their highly charged attraction really well while still keeping them young and sweet together.

Reviewer: Emily Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/02/2006 - 11:36 pm Title: Chapter Four

Wow. You are really writing the tension really well ::fans face::. Great job, and I hope you pull out the UST for a long time... dont want to jump into anything without making it very worth their while.

Reviewer: tis-kit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/02/2006 - 09:00 pm Title: Chapter Four

Great chapter as always. Oh, to be Buffy in that pool....

Reviewer: wolfspider Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/02/2006 - 08:32 pm Title: Chapter Four

hmmmm will Buffy having to not tell the whole truth,bite her in the ass. Oh wait she would rather William bite her in the ass LOL. Very nice inner dialoge with the both them. Seems things are going to go from could be naughty to semi naughty. So much can happen in a pool. I mean shorts could be lost, tops undone, lips meeting...ohhhhhhhh boy this is going to be a totally insane story, that I CAN"T wait to read everyword.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/02/2006 - 06:40 pm Title: Chapter Four

So indeed Buffy worked in a strip club when she mad Angel. Mmmh but Buffy gives William the PG-rated version. I wonder what truth is William talking about that Buffy doesn't know of. To be cold hearted? Well they aren't married that long.. so maybe Buffy didn't encounter that till now. ~ Swimming? That wasn't such a good idea maybe. Now they are both temped. But so much fun to read :)

Reviewer: nikki_chinger Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/02/2006 - 06:17 pm Title: Chapter Four

ooooh i love it!!! GREAT STORY KEEP IT UP!!!!

Reviewer: sirc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/02/2006 - 05:24 pm Title: Chapter Four

great chapter :D

Reviewer: C Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/02/2006 - 04:46 pm Title: Chapter Four

What a great story! A great build up of tension and wonderful characterization. I'm really looking forward to reading the rest. Keep up the good work.

Reviewer: Tara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/02/2006 - 04:02 pm Title: Chapter Four

Mmmm purdy chap.

Reviewer: M Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/02/2006 - 12:56 pm Title: Chapter Four

I have to say I'm definitely liking this. You can feel the tension between Buffy and William. Somehow I bet Liam isn't being as honorable to their vows, I'm sure he has plenty on the side. Can't wait to see where you take us with this one :)

Reviewer: Kitty Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/02/2006 - 10:35 am Title: Chapter Four

Oh yeah! Here's your new story and I've read now all former chapters and wow - amazing! I love the beginning and how Buffy is concerned about the relationship between William and his father.
And I so hope that this bad little voice of reason will become silent soon. *eg*

Reviewer: Angi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/02/2006 - 07:03 am Title: Chapter Four

Very hot chapter. Tricky set-up you got for this story, too. Wonder how long it´ll take Angel to behave like the ass he is and how long it will be before Spike and Buffy really hit it off.

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/02/2006 - 06:22 am Title: Chapter Four

loved it

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/02/2006 - 05:12 am Title: Chapter Four

So much trouble......those two are doomed.

Reviewer: Dirktavian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/02/2006 - 04:46 am Title: Chapter Four

So, Buffy the former stripper, huh? Kinda makes sense that is the only place she'd meet a man like Liam. I like Buffy's *other* voice, the one that says "YUM!" -- Especially when thinking there never really was anything that could cover up one of his erections--- Yum! ;)

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/02/2006 - 03:27 am Title: Chapter Four

A dangerous game at that. Can't keep their hands off each other, two people practically trapped alone in a house together even though they really aren't at all. Love how they're creeping along. Fabulous chapter.

Reviewer: alysa Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/02/2006 - 02:43 am Title: Chapter Four

more please more. I want to know what happens

Reviewer: Laura Liz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/02/2006 - 02:38 am Title: Chapter Four

my oh my....if i had william in that pool...oh, the pleasures that run through my mind! ;) more please

Reviewer: galatea Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/02/2006 - 02:35 am Title: Chapter Four

Oh, that Buffy is one eeeeeeevil stepmother, all right. She is seriously playing with fire - I mean, they both are, but somehow I hold Buffy more responsible than William for any inpropriety. Because of William's crappy relationship with his father, I don't really expect him to have the feelings of love and loyalty that would declare Liam's wife off limits. And I've always felt that it's the married person's responsibility to keep their vows, not the other man/woman. So far, I'm finding her actions understandable ('cause you've written William as almost impossible to resist), but not justifiable.

That of course doesn't mean I'm not finding the utter hotness enjoyable, because heaven knows I am! The constant reminders of William's size and stamina are certainly making me look forward to any and all smuttiness.

Reviewer: MsClawdia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/02/2006 - 02:27 am Title: Chapter Four

Ooohhh, getting dangerous!

Reviewer: Riahannon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/02/2006 - 02:12 am Title: Chapter Four

definitely lovin' this story! I have a guilty pleasure for the taboo, especially when it's really well written like this! Thanks!

Reviewer: shelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/02/2006 - 02:07 am Title: Chapter Four

scandalous!! love it!

Reviewer: gotkona Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/02/2006 - 01:46 am Title: Chapter Four

Well that was a large amount of UST for one chapter. Wow.

Reviewer: Konstantine Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/02/2006 - 01:45 am Title: Chapter Four

I like where this is going! The only thing that bothers me is I'm not use to seeing William so unconfident...but keep updating!

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