Oh my God! Poor William! THAT's an embarassing situation. *lol* I'm curious to see how Buffy will handle it. Still enjoying this very much. ; )

well done :)

Well that line that was there, she went and made it really big before she decided to just jump over it. I wonder when her mind will catch up with her heart about which man in that house she truly has affections for. Great chapter. Looking forward to Wednesday.

What's the matter, Addie? Can't you live on our loooooove? :-D Seriously, though, congratulations on the promotion! w00t!

I thought the last pool scene was a dream at first, but William's, uh, over-eagerness had me interpreting that it was real. It's interesting coming right after Liam's accusing Buffy of cheating with William. Make you wonder if somewhere she's thinking, " I might as well get the pleasure if I'm going to be punished for it either way."

I also thought how you desrcibed how William hardle knew how to even kiss a girl was totally sweet and totally hot at the same time.

I enjoyed the intensified flirting, and having Liam make the cheating accusation right on its heels was powerful. Liam throwing Buffy's stripping in her face just beat her down a little bit more. I couldn't tell if the pool scene that followed Buffy's mental promise to keep her distance was a dream or not. Nice job keeping that open to interpretation.

Yay, they made out.. a little! *grins*

I really don't like Angel in this story. He doesn't love Buffy because he's treatening her so bad. Okay she had a bad past and she's younger than him but she is his wife...
And I also think that there could be another woman in Liams life.
I hope you can update soon but real life is of course more important.

Hey, congrats on the RL thing!! Loved the chapter, and I mean *loved* it! I wonder what possessed Buffy to go back on her decision not to mess around with William any more. At first, I was wondering if it was Buffy's dream, but once William came undone, I am starting to wonder if it is William's dream? Or, dare I hope it, real life? Looking forward to more.

I'm disappointed that you'll be posting less frequently, but real life definitely has to come first. Congratulations on the promotion.

Liam's an ass, and I hate him more and more all the time. He treated Buffy like a five year old in this chapter. And questioning her about what she's doing with him? She really hasn't done much to arouse suspicion... until the end of the chapter, that is. It will be interesting to get Buffy's take on what happened.

Allowance? ALLOWANCE??? Alright, thats it. That bum is going down! He deserves anything that comes to him,even if it is purely used to get back at him. The whole William/Buffy thing is a wild ride, and I wonder how she'll react...

Anyways, about your posting, Congrats on your promotion=D That's great! RL obviously comes before fanfics, but I am glad that you are continuing to grace us with your writing. Thanks for the warning, as well as efforts to keep it all going.

I am thoroughly enjoying this fic, Addie. As always, your writing and plot lines are primo stuff. I'll admit that ever since 'Need', I've been really into shy William characterizations and this is no exception.

I completely know where you're coming from in regards to the RL squeeze. I hope everything works out for you and will enjoy any updates you can manage in between the push and pull of the real world. ~Jae

Congrats on the promotion. I will await updates on Wednesday.

congratulations on your promotion :)
I totally loved this chapter and the naughty playtime in the pool.
keep up the good work!

Wow, from just a kiss? Musta been one hell of a kiss! Good chapter. :)