Date: 10/28/2006 - 03:52 pm Title: Prologue
They let her just take a dying baby out of the hospital? Or is Buffy that disturbed....?
Date: 10/28/2006 - 10:07 am Title: Prologue
Duh.. found your site (and your LJ but you're F-Only but I see you don't post the story there) and I remember now that I saw your story (Here without you) at Spuffyfantasy.. *cough it is still on my to read list*
But now to the new one:
I like Spike being a doctor, precisely a Pediatric Heart Surgeon.
And then the first meeting between William and Elizabeth. The thought that Buffy's baby is about to die (why by the way? But I think it will be revealed later) makes me sad. No mother (parents) should have to suffer this. *sniff* And even if it is dangerous to be outside in the rain with a baby for said baby, I love the thought why she is doing it for Lilly. A very sad begin but a very moving chapter. Looking forward to read more of it. So more please :)
Date: 10/27/2006 - 03:41 pm Title: Prologue
Fantastic start!! So heartbreaking.
Date: 10/27/2006 - 06:00 am Title: Prologue
Lovely, poignant start. I'm really looking forward to reading more.
Date: 10/27/2006 - 01:11 am Title: Prologue
OMG... why could you do this to me?? You can't make me cry in the prologue of the darn story! *swipes at tears*
Seriously, I had no idea you wrote fanfic. I am absolutely loving this so far. I read a lot of fiction, and this is unlike anything I've ever read before. Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: LOL! I didn't know you read fanfic :-) I don't write that much...only when I get an idea and it won't go away...kinda like this! We need to talk soon...Flan is only a little more than a month away!!!!
Date: 10/26/2006 - 10:04 pm Title: Prologue
What's wrong with Lilly? Update soon please!
Date: 10/26/2006 - 09:54 pm Title: Prologue
loved it. great start. please post soon.
Date: 10/26/2006 - 08:58 pm Title: Prologue
It was amazing and I really want to read the rest! Update soon
Date: 10/26/2006 - 08:41 pm Title: Prologue
How sad. Please update soon!
Date: 10/26/2006 - 08:30 pm Title: Prologue
Oh, I am so excited! Can't wait for more! I've read one of your other stories, and it's one of my very favorite AUs.
Author's Response: Oh thank you so much! I assume you're talking about "Here without you" I was actually thinking about posting that on here but I can't decide if I want to do that or not. Since it's based on a movie...I don't how well that would go over.
Date: 10/26/2006 - 06:52 pm Title: Prologue
i loved buffy in the rain. Her pain was palpable, yet not "screamed" as it could have been... (hope i made myself clear...)
Date: 10/26/2006 - 06:21 pm Title: Prologue
Wow. Excellent beginning--poor Buffy! I wonder what her story is. Can't wait to read more!
Date: 10/26/2006 - 05:51 pm Title: Prologue
totally ditto to everything angi has said!!
Date: 10/26/2006 - 05:50 pm Title: Prologue
Heart-wrenching. Anyone unaffected by your first chapter has a heart of stone. Go on soon.
Date: 10/26/2006 - 05:45 pm Title: Prologue
great story so far
Date: 10/26/2006 - 05:00 pm Title: Prologue
i really like this story so far
i feel sorry for th baby tho
cant wait for a update and i hope it will be soon