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Reviewer: Xela Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/05/2006 - 11:05 pm Title: Chasing Cars

So sad. But the beginnings of a great story! Looking for the next update...

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/01/2006 - 05:53 pm Title: Chasing Cars

Loved to read the chapter. You captured the emotions so well. First William standing up for Buffy against Harmony. Good to see William was so thoughtful to take some pictures of Lilly (and Buffy with Lilly). It's sad to know that Lilly won't have a chance.
The non italic part at the end of the chapter? It sounds as if Lilly has died and Buffy didn't take it well.
But I loved the chapter anyway even if it was sad (to think the baby doesn't have a chance).

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/01/2006 - 12:39 am Title: Chasing Cars

Ahh..Buffy had to be committed after the baby died...a danger to herself.

So sad...

Reviewer: cee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/01/2006 - 12:20 am Title: Chasing Cars

I love Snow Patrol lyrics. And this song is perfect.

Can't say much except looking forward to more!!

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/31/2006 - 11:27 pm Title: Chasing Cars

You're really capturing the melancholy mood here. The first chapter started out so optimistically, happy William saving lives and joking with the nurses. The scene in the courtyard was haunting and turned the mood around beautifully. I like the premise, and you're handling it well so far. I'm looking forward to how you develop the characters and expand the storyline.

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/31/2006 - 10:55 pm Title: Chasing Cars

please keep up the great work on this story

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/31/2006 - 10:20 pm Title: Chasing Cars

I'm guessing Lily died and Buffy's pretty much in a daze....update soon please!

Reviewer: MARGARET Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/31/2006 - 10:02 pm Title: Chasing Cars

WOW THIS IS SO SAD, BUT BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN, THANKS, PLEASE UPDATE SOON

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/31/2006 - 09:49 pm Title: Chasing Cars

Evil cliffhanger! Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: turnedbyspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/31/2006 - 08:22 pm Title: Chasing Cars

Wow. It's so sad! Poor Buffy. Loved this chapter--it's nice to know a little bit of the background of her and her baby. Loved it! Especially the part where he tells Harmony off! (also, I had Chasing Cars stuck in my head all day, and then I opened this chapter, and there it was! I think it must have been a a sign :-)
can't wait for more!!!

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/31/2006 - 07:47 pm Title: Chasing Cars

loved it soooooo very much. glad you posted. please post soon. buffy's gonna loose her baby!!! poor buffy!!!! this is gonna be sad, huh???? *sighs* okay.....i can take it...but if i start crying...i expect you to provide the tissues!!! lol. post soon.

Reviewer: Brat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/31/2006 - 07:00 pm Title: Chasing Cars

So heartbreakingly sad :( But I love the tale you're spinning here. I so loved Spike putting Harmony in her place like that lol..I think i would have cried too lol.

Author's Response: I know right! That was basically everything I would have loved to have said to Harmony during season 5 of Angel :-) Yup...that's fanfic for me...working out my agression towards some of the characters lol.

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