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Reviewer: Gia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/10/2006 - 06:07 pm Title: Holy Tears

Just found this story,saw it at LLG awards, congrats on the nomination!I love the story so far, please update soon!

Reviewer: Suzee Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/09/2006 - 05:36 pm Title: Holy Tears

Sorry for just reviewing this chapter (I haven't been able to have a lot of computer time so I've been copying off some fic to read....which leads to no reviews)....

I did want to leave at least one review though :) This is a really great fic (asking Brat which fics she reads was an even better idea than I thought) and I'm glad you posted it here for us to read :-)

I hope you're able to post more soon, I'm looking forward to seeing how things develop between Buffy and Spike and what he's able to find out from/about her.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/19/2006 - 10:47 pm Title: Holy Tears

More please!

Reviewer: Xela Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/19/2006 - 03:25 pm Title: Holy Tears

Such a sad start. But at least that gives me hope for a happy future!

Reviewer: Jessica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/19/2006 - 10:29 am Title: Holy Tears

I feel so bad for her. Such a heartbreaking thing to go through. And it sounds like Buffy's life before wasn't very good either. Hopefully she will tell William her story, and it will help some. More please.

Reviewer: silvinne Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/19/2006 - 03:49 am Title: Holy Tears

I'm crying here.. but I'm loving the story. More please!

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/18/2006 - 06:11 pm Title: Holy Tears

Poor Buffy. Will she ever get better? Update soon please!

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/18/2006 - 01:23 pm Title: Holy Tears

Oh my, so Lilly is indeed dead. Had to be, I knew that, yet to read she is? That makes it more real. At last she wasn't alone, was with her mother. *sniff* Even when Buffy is now speaking.
I'm glad I caught up with your story (for now). Looking forward to read more; can be I fall behind again but I'll catch up at some point.

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/18/2006 - 05:13 am Title: Holy Tears

more please

Reviewer: rosie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/18/2006 - 03:30 am Title: Holy Tears

cant wait to see what happens next!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/17/2006 - 09:24 pm Title: Holy Tears

love the story, more please.

Reviewer: turnedbyspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/17/2006 - 08:05 pm Title: Holy Tears

Wow. Poor Buffy. She's so lucky to have William. "he worshipped her name with a whisper"--I love that sentence.

Reviewer: Brat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/17/2006 - 07:55 pm Title: Holy Tears

No fair making me cry! :(

That was so beautiful and sweet. I like that he relieved himself in the bathroom that way, he handled that quite well :) Great chapter babe.

Author's Response: hahaha you said handled :-) Sorry...had to. So yeah, I struggled with even putting that into this chapter. I thought that maybe it was inappropriate for the so far EXTREMELY somber mood of the story...then I thought I'm absolutely going to put this in here. William is at heart, I guy. Furthermore, he's a good guy. He wants to help Buffy because that's what he promised to do and he feels so sad for her but again, he's a GUY and Buffy's hot so he sees her, especially in her underwear, and his mind goes directly to MMMMM...Boobies! So him being a guy would NEED to work off a little bit of that unresolved tension :-)

Reviewer: Dana Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/17/2006 - 07:16 pm Title: Holy Tears

Poor Buffy!!!What a sad powerful story!!! Plwase update soon!

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