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Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/31/2006 - 02:33 am Title: Chapter Two: Reacquainted

I'm glad they seem to be talking now! Update soon please!

Author's Response: Thanks! I just sent the next part to my beta.

Reviewer: willowmouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/29/2006 - 12:42 am Title: Chapter Two: Reacquainted

That was a great chapter, I like that Faith & Spike are becoming friends ...

Author's Response: Thanks. Buffy is less happy about it than you ;)

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/29/2006 - 12:35 am Title: Chapter Two: Reacquainted

loved it!!!! hopefully, buffy is finally convinced that spike is still *her* spike. great job. please post soon.

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm working on the next part now.

Reviewer: willowmouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/27/2006 - 08:13 pm Title: Chapter One: Welcome Back to the Hellmouth

I'm so very happy that you have started the sequel to BT. THis is GREAT!!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! The next chapter is with the beta now. Hope you'll continue to like it.

Reviewer: kcarolj65 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/27/2006 - 05:48 pm Title: Chapter One: Welcome Back to the Hellmouth

This is really fascinating. Wonderful dream sequence with Xander - excellent bit of characterization, btw - and an interesting premise that'll definitely keep me coming back for more! More soon? Please?

Author's Response: Oh, thanks so much. I really enjoyed writing the dream sequence. I'm about 3/4 done with a draft of the next chapter.

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/27/2006 - 06:21 am Title: Chapter One: Welcome Back to the Hellmouth

She's being so dumb, insisting in her head that Spike's probably not him anymore. Like Angel wasn't Angelus with a conscience. She has to be seriously delusional not to see that it was the same guy, in retrospect.
See, Buffy, if he was just William, by your logic, then you'd have a Victorian in front of you with a very different amount of self-esteem. In the time you've seen him so far, has he acted not like Spike at all? NO!! He's still Spike, just with more of a conscience, and gentler feelings towards mankind. That's it!!

God, she's stupid right now.

Loved your Faith perspective, and Amanda was pitch perfect right away.

Author's Response: Glad you liked the Faith and Amanda bits. Keep in mind that Buffy doesn't know anything about William really, so she wouldn't know what to expect. Give her a little time ;) Thanks for the feedback!

Reviewer: jane Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/27/2006 - 05:31 am Title: Chapter One: Welcome Back to the Hellmouth

Great start...

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Emma Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/27/2006 - 02:27 am Title: Chapter One: Welcome Back to the Hellmouth

Weird. It was totally actually like all the dreams Buffy's ever had. I think it would be easier to follow though, if you have a little more description of scenery/setting, because right now, it's a little confusing. But maybe that was your intent. I'm not sure. Like, I'm sure the intent is supposed to be a little unclear, but I think just the general what's happening is unclear. I dunno. Just a thought. Great work, more soon, I hope?

Author's Response: I had intended the dream sequence to be taking place in the old Sunnydale High library. I'll work on making the details clearer in future scenes. Thanks for the feedback. I'm working on the next chapter now.

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/27/2006 - 01:54 am Title: Chapter One: Welcome Back to the Hellmouth

That was...interesting. In a good way though. Xander was a riot! Update soon please!

Author's Response: So glad you enjoyed Xander! I had to kill him off, but I just can't imagine writing a story without him in it somehow. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/27/2006 - 12:11 am Title: Chapter One: Welcome Back to the Hellmouth

i so don't get buffy. this is what she wanted right? i mean she was always saying that she couldn't luv spike without a soul and now he's got one. What's the flub?? why is she acting so....i don't know...ungrateful?? great job. please post soon.

Author's Response: But remember that my Buffy did love Spike without the soul. And she doesn't know if this new SouledSpike guy is the same man or if her Spike is gone now. I hope you'll stick with me as I explore this more. Thanks for reviewing!

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