Date: 11/14/2006 - 05:41 am Title: Ch. 18
Big brother Spike back in full force. Glad he let her keep her honor.
Author's Response: Spike would never let Dawn hurt herself, even for him. :)
Date: 11/11/2006 - 10:13 pm Title: Ch. 18
No I won't laugh.. Dawn got her will, really has a bad hangover now.
Oh, Willow's sober up. Now what is worse, the illness or the medicine?
:) At last it works like a charm and Dawn needed her head ready again.
Ah good decision; Dawn explained everything and let Spike ask a question. Even when it wasn't the one she thought about :)
Loved the chapter but I run out of pictures or put them under the wrong keyword in my LJ Memories .. *sends you virtual chocolate*
Next to the phone call I guess :)
Author's Response: You can laugh if you want too! :) Feeling like you've been turned inside out probably feels pretty yukky. Going into babble and giggle mode afterward is probable just embarrassing. ?
Virtual chocolate is more than good!!! Thank You!!!
Date: 11/11/2006 - 04:51 pm Title: Ch. 18
you are using an awful lot of words to say nothing over and over again! you need to tighten up the story and stop repeating youself. carry the plot forward and make something happen!!!!!!!!
Date: 11/11/2006 - 02:55 pm Title: Ch. 18
read up to chapter 38 on your LJ , did you write anything beyond that. Hope so, this story is really good.
Author's Response: Thank You!!! I'm working on more, but haven't posted them yet. :)
Date: 11/11/2006 - 02:48 pm Title: Ch. 18
Loved the Spike-Dawn interaction. I'm a sucker for Spike-Dawn friendship.
Author's Response: Thank You!!! Me too!!! I love Spike and Dawn together. It was one of the things that I liked best about S5. :)