Date: 09/29/2007 - 09:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
William Pratt, here I come
Oh my god. What a thought. I love this story, and well, I kind of 'owed' you a real review for this. I don't remember (and I'm not checking, either) which one of these stories you posted first -- but from the first time I saw this, I thought, oohh this could be something good. Boy, was I right. Glad my instincts proved true.
Date: 01/31/2007 - 03:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
For the record, I love the Buffy series and think Joss is a genius.
I was talking on yahoo and discovered that an online friend was excited to tell me about her daughters fan fiction. I think I'm supposed to say that mommason recommended your story. I loved this story and the little personality traits still in each of the characters...it was fun to live through them again. Though I I did feel that Buffy and Spike were moving a bit fast for the week or so they'd been together. I do have a question about why Buffy's father kept calling her Elizabeth. It had me confused every time. You are an imaginative story teller and I look forward to you maybe writing something totally from your creation.
Thank you and have your mom let me know when more chapters have been added.
Jessie
Date: 12/17/2006 - 01:30 am Title: Chapter 1
I can't wait for Spike to find Anya's little present either. ;) Now that'll make for some hot smut. Yes, the chapter was amazing, and I can NOT wait for the next one.
Date: 11/11/2006 - 10:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
Bravo!! (Throws Roses...)!!
Date: 11/09/2006 - 01:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow. This is really good--it sucks that Hank is such a bastard. Poor Buffy. William is gonna help her, right? love this!
Date: 11/05/2006 - 04:30 am Title: Chapter 1
As they say at McDonalds I'm Lovin it! Keep up the good work
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Jeanette! I just wanted to write because it seems you had posted your review twice, so I deleted one of them. As much as I'd love my review count up that extra '1', I figured one great review was good enough. ~Jae ; - )
Date: 10/31/2006 - 11:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
Somehow...I have a feeling she picked the right one.
Date: 10/31/2006 - 02:54 am Title: Chapter 1
When are you posting more?
Date: 10/30/2006 - 11:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
good beginning..............
Date: 10/30/2006 - 11:47 pm Title: Chapter 1
great so far
Date: 10/30/2006 - 10:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
wow. great start!!! please post soon.
Date: 10/30/2006 - 09:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
So Buffy's everything where Buffy parents, her mother and her stepfather, very unexpected by accident. Yeah, seeing the caskets is the hardest part. No wonder Buffy started to cry then. (Ah and Spike wasn't at the funeral because he wasn't aloud to take the day off?)
Mmm Hank. That answers the question of Buffy's father. Three years in hell so to say. I wonder if William can help her. The title of your stories seems to show a bumpy road. Loved the start. :)
Date: 10/30/2006 - 07:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
love the beginning of this story! please continue
Date: 10/30/2006 - 03:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
loved the chapter!..cant wait for more!
Date: 10/30/2006 - 12:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
I loved this first chapter! Cant wait to read more ;)